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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-24 08:24 AM

Open Up And See

what is
this power
you hold
do not let
another moment
fly past
without this
sighs have
been misplaced
yet not lost
a labyrinth
to a
breath unbroken
inside is
the key
to your
answer

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-24 08:26 AM

so the answer is inside,,,

liked the penning of this,,,

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-09-24 08:26 AM

Helen:

and it is looking within, deep inside
that we pull out the garbage
toss it aside and go shopping
for an entirely new life . . .
long, at last
xxoo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-09-25 11:15 AM

Helen, I'm sending this back for more to "Open up and see".
very good writing, Lady.

Hugs

Ethel

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-09-25 01:42 PM

You made me feel
as if I had been
captured inside
an inkpen...
in preparation
of being let
loose

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-09-26 04:50 PM

well done

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-09-26 10:43 PM

Drawn by two things, the writer and (I freely admit) the title.

I'm glad I stayed.

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-09-26 10:47 PM

(sigh) The answer is truly the way out from the inside: distract the Minotaur within then with a needle and a thread let your spirit soar free in grace! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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