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Screams |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I heard screams In my ear Fading Like faith And realized They were mine. |
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iwannarime22 Junior Member
since 2003-10-25
Posts 19Rogers, Arkansas |
AWESOME! I LOVE IT! It is so short but so WOW! LOL Good job I heard screams In my ear Fading Like faith And realized They were mine. WOW lol Love, Kim Pockat |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
lol, thanks Kim...Your energy's almost infectious  Wait a second...Is infectious a word?? |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
mine too. mine too. Meg Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
yea it's a word hehe. Meg Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thanks PB  lol, okay, just makin' sure |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
screams make such pretty music when you can't sleep... What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
OMG liz u really are an insomniac aren't u?? Meg Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
what? it's only like...9:00 I'm 'reserching.' yeah..grins What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Actually, at night, I'm wishing I COULDN'T hear anything, so that I CAN sleep... |
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Atrum Mortalis New Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 9 |
i like those short poems that have a clear meaning and have a shock at the end. I have some difficulty doing that. I just dun know why. I can shock people at the end with a long poem but other than that im not able to preform that task. Good job. |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
hehehe. koko u r normal, me too. u know what makes pretty music? rain. And my boyfriend's voice. hehehe. Meg Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Atrum- I know exactly what you mean. I'm still a beginner, and and still learning. Studying a lot of the people around here on this site that are good at it, is a good way to get better at it. -Rereads that- Ack. Did that make sense? I'm not sure. I'm sick and my head's all funny. My fingers are protesting this typing... |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Meg- You're right. Rain has got to be the most beautiful sound in the world. Well...ONE of them... Although, at night, even THAT'S annoying... Geeze...How did we get to insomnia again?? lol |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
hm, nice indeed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, no! The thought of such a sweetie pie screaming, wrenches my heart!  ~ May songs replace the screams, Dear One!  HHH Linda  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The screams in your head are the reminder that your not yet numb.. Enjoyed.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Linda- You are so sweet! Were you an apple pie in your last life??? Hehehehehe Susan- Yeah, in this case, the screams are kind of a good thing. It means I'm becoming unnumb Thanks for the read and the comment both of you  |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
pandonov- Thank ya muchly! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
KoKo, that was literally the sweetest question that I have ever been asked! ~ and yes, I was an apple pie in my last life! lol  Loveya! Linda |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
all i can say is? welcome back from numbville!  i hope to be leaving soon myself. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh My this is SO good beyond amazing KoKo thank God you knew *smile* xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I sure hope this is not how you're really feeling as you are strong and faith is your middle name! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, keep the faith, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
When my son was little. He said rain sounded like bacon frying. Good one. Bon-Bon  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
a twister. enjoyed it. |
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