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KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-10-28 08:38 PM


I heard screams
In my ear
Fading
Like faith
And realized
They were mine.

© Copyright 2003 Lauren - All Rights Reserved
iwannarime22
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since 2003-10-25
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1 posted 2003-10-28 08:49 PM


AWESOME! I LOVE IT! It is so short but so WOW! LOL Good job

I heard screams
In my ear
Fading
Like faith
And realized
They were mine.

WOW lol

Love, Kim Pockat

KoKo
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2 posted 2003-10-28 08:50 PM


lol, thanks Kim...Your energy's almost infectious


Wait a second...Is infectious a word??

PsychoticBunni
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Mythical Atlantis
3 posted 2003-10-28 08:53 PM


mine too. mine too.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

PsychoticBunni
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4 posted 2003-10-28 08:54 PM


yea it's a word hehe.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

KoKo
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5 posted 2003-10-28 08:56 PM


Thanks PB

lol, okay, just makin' sure

Wind
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6 posted 2003-10-28 09:01 PM


screams make such pretty music when you can't sleep...

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

PsychoticBunni
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7 posted 2003-10-28 09:02 PM


OMG liz u really are an insomniac aren't u??

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

Wind
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8 posted 2003-10-28 09:03 PM


what? it's only like...9:00

I'm 'reserching.'

yeah..grins

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

KoKo
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9 posted 2003-10-28 09:04 PM


Actually, at night, I'm wishing I COULDN'T hear anything, so that I CAN sleep...


Atrum Mortalis
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10 posted 2003-10-28 09:05 PM


i like those short poems that have a clear meaning and have a shock at the end. I have some difficulty doing that. I just dun know why. I can shock people at the end with a long poem but other than that im not able to preform that task. Good job.
PsychoticBunni
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11 posted 2003-10-28 09:08 PM


hehehe. koko u r normal, me too. u know what makes pretty music? rain. And my boyfriend's voice. hehehe.


Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

KoKo
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12 posted 2003-10-28 09:11 PM


Atrum-

I know exactly what you mean.
I'm still a beginner, and and still learning.
Studying a lot of the people around here on this site that are good at it, is a good way to get better at it.

-Rereads that- Ack. Did that make sense? I'm not sure. I'm sick and my head's all funny.
My fingers are protesting this typing...

KoKo
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13 posted 2003-10-28 09:13 PM


Meg-
You're right. Rain has got to be the most beautiful sound in the world. Well...ONE of them...

Although, at night, even THAT'S annoying...


Geeze...How did we get to insomnia again?? lol

pandonov
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14 posted 2003-10-28 09:34 PM


hm, nice indeed
Earth Angel
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15 posted 2003-10-29 02:47 PM


Oh, no! The thought of such a sweetie pie screaming, wrenches my heart!

~ May songs replace the screams, Dear One!

HHH
Linda

Susan Caldwell
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16 posted 2003-10-29 03:22 PM


The screams in your head are the reminder that your not yet numb..

Enjoyed..

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

KoKo
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17 posted 2003-10-29 04:25 PM


Linda-

You are so sweet! Were you an apple pie in your last life??? Hehehehehe

Susan-

Yeah, in this case, the screams are kind of a good thing. It means I'm becoming unnumb

Thanks for the read and the comment both of you

KoKo
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18 posted 2003-10-29 04:26 PM


pandonov-

Thank ya muchly!

vandana
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19 posted 2003-10-29 05:21 PM


liked it
Earth Angel
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20 posted 2003-10-29 05:39 PM


KoKo, that was literally the sweetest question that I have ever been asked! ~ and yes, I was an apple pie in my last life! lol


Loveya!
Linda

Edder
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21 posted 2003-11-02 10:47 AM


all i can say is? welcome back from numbville! i hope to be leaving soon myself.
littlewing
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22 posted 2003-11-02 11:09 AM


Oh My this is SO good
beyond amazing KoKo
thank God you knew
*smile*
xxoo

Mistletoe Angel
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23 posted 2003-11-02 04:06 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I sure hope this is not how you're really feeling as you are strong and faith is your middle name! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, keep the faith, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Bonnie j
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24 posted 2003-11-02 07:04 PM


When my son was little. He said rain sounded like bacon frying.
Good one.
Bon-Bon

passing shadows
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ambrish
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26 posted 2003-11-03 05:39 AM


a twister.
     enjoyed it.

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