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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-10-28 02:42 PM



~*Butterfly Sisters*~


Unconditional
friendship held through passing time
woven into rhyme.

Sharing hopes and fears
hearts reaching to horizons
unity of two.

Together through all
good, bad, or indifferent
accepting as is...

butterfly sisters.


whispering....thank you....for always being there ~
when I need you most....


It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-28-2003 03:22 PM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-10-28 02:45 PM



You have wonderful friends...
I see it in their eyes

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
2 posted 2003-10-28 02:54 PM


Indeed....you have a beautiful soul

too sister


Me~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-10-28 03:27 PM


I love this, my friend....

And to you        sister

Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-10-28 03:34 PM


Such a loving beautiful soul you are!


my sister!

~Heart Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

scorpio
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right...there
5 posted 2003-10-28 04:34 PM


Very beautiful poetic trio!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2003-10-29 09:45 AM


ah my sisters, thank you all....

Scorpio, my thanks to you too.

Logan
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7 posted 2003-10-29 01:43 PM


How beautiful and so wonderful to have one there both in need and in laughter...very gentle smile..and so well done
Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-11-01 02:46 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully whimsical, sweet friend, and may your butterfly sister forever flitter in your heart and give you smiles in flight! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2003-11-01 03:00 PM


GentleSpirit~
You flit the flutter of friendship on soft wings dear lady~
This is so lovely ... so you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

jwesley
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10 posted 2003-11-01 03:37 PM


Butterfly sisters...what a beautiful way of saying it, from a butterfly herself...

jwesley

Suetang
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11 posted 2003-11-01 03:52 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Donna.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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