Open Poetry #29 |
The Hand of Friend |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
He did not mean to raise her tears or lower her fears still in awe is she for many a trip upon canvassed plain of parchment to deeper pools of thought, he's taken her, never forsaking her of kindness' dwell ~ and talked her through hell he'll never know that in bend to kiss she wanted to impart that veil of mist where dreams are found by poets, bound by many a trip upon canvassed plain to deeper pools where parched souls sip but e'en leather crouched in crinkled keep of arid space grows supple if not jerked, but rather, tended by moist tear of what was and soft, softer, softly enfolding parchment of dreams once again... speak ye to the keeper of hope, for she is eternal even in her naiveté that some one hand might dwell upon thy breast though time clicks by, feel the wink of lash against thy cheek and blink not, for 'tis real, the hand of friend... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-01-2003 11:15 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm keeping this. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
We must be on the same wave link today. Look what I just posted...... /pip/Forum82/HTML/002223.html (though yours is so much better) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"though time clicks by, feel the wink of lash against thy cheek and blink not, for 'tis real, the hand of friend... " Keeping this...as soon as I dry the tears. Hugs~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Not much better feeling than holding the hand of a friend is there, and I think you nailed this one rigth on! Try to make time to listen to |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
, you have raised a tear to cheek today m'friend.....just lovely... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have this feeling for one man, one friend...and it is exactly this |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
still in awe is she ======================= yep...of him and this lovely, unique write... mind if I keep it? You're the color of the sky reflected in each store-front window pane ... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So very, very lovely Much respect for this, your pen Hugs Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I always admire your choice of words and how they form the images you see. Nicely done. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
but e'en leather crouched in crinkled keep of arid space grows supple if not jerked, but rather, tended by moist tear of what was and soft, softer, softly enfolding parchment of dreams once again... as seas shall wash the soul from bondage, so shall the hand that touches in kindness. A worn and leathery hand reaches out, that it might touch again the parchment.. Beyond the veil... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...This is stunning! |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
What a gentle beauty this is, and to think I almost missed it. Glad I didn't let it pass. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Sunshine../\..yes, very touching; much enjoyed..strong poem.. ../\..Spiros |
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Mary Ann Member
since 2003-04-23
Posts 111 |
Touchingly beautiful Thank you for the lovely read.. God bless, ~MA~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the keeper of hope kinda like you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is just lovely... excellent write! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Absolutely beautiful, Karilea. Patricia |
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