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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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It's Sunday hello above I think you are or all around that star can’t say that I’ve not looked away a stray but I used to be Sunday’s child licking that gold star beside my name in school and every night I laid me down my soul what was that I didn’t know but didn’t want to die before I woke forsaken..no no I asked you to help me back then when I was ten with something bigger then I have known since put my hands out into the dark in my room with the closet I feared and asked just needed to know what to do and while I’m at the questioning I’ve been wondering about that angel I called Michelle you know she was special she was most for me a first big love and my prayer was big that day I know I’d faltered earlier and now I was in need all of a sudden I asked ..is that greed to take a child who was loved so dear this tear is all you gave to me in answer and still I ask how is this plan worked out I don’t mean any disrespect and I’m sure you know my heart is good believes in love and brotherhood and I appreciate all the little things you made for me to touch and I know one day beyond this time sense will make of me some semblance of what this time spent is meant to be until then just one thing for peace on earth goodwill to men could we get some help with this amen --- with thanks to serenity |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If you only know how I feel for you, for Michelle.... For the hurt in your lives. For the growth that you have seen... Helping with that last Amen... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That's the hardest part -- that there simply are no answers at all, let alone easy answers that make sense to a human mind in a world where so many things are logical and linear in the way they happen. But know this, that there will be an answer, and one you can understand, either because it is finally placed in human terms, or because you have moved beyond those limitations. Patience....that's a hallmark of angels, as you know. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) I too wish I knew just how to help comfort your heart, as I can't imagine how the loss of a child can feel completely still growing up, dearest friend! (sad sigh) I send many angel hugs your way and know always Michelle loves you and will always be your little girl, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so beautiful and heart-touching... I truly have no words, so I'll borrow those already posted and nod in agreement.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Amen indeed... Loveya lady...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll thank Serenity, too for whatever she did to bring this forward. Bless you both. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'll add my Amen to Barry's..and the rest.. along with a hug.. |
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IrishDreamer Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 55Kansas |
With my job I have seen far to many children taken from us each one leaves a memory and mark on my heart. I can't imagine how hard this has been for you. Thank you for sharing, this is so heart touching. Bless you and best wishes. ~Angie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Once again you have touched me where few do. Amen my dear. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - a truly touching poem - Paul |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
No sweets... its not greed ... and you dont ever need a reason to repost your poetry. But I for one am always glad you do. "I've still got sand in my shoes |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
and I appreciate all the little things you made for me to touch..... He gave the little things for us to touch, maybe in some respect for painting the bigger picture.....you are so touching....Peace...and hugsssss Martie.... Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sis~ Love you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
We have many things to thank Serenity for.... and serenity...this poem among them. Your writing simply grasps reality and turns it in a new direction. Beautiful stuff. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
dang, I'm sitting here at work and I just want to burst into tears... beautiful Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
through moistened eyes, I thank you, Martie, for sharing this beautiful, pure human write |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Sometimes it hurts....but you write of it so beautifully, Martie.   ~ElizabethDreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Martie this leaves me beyond words...you are so very beautiful... |
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