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Midnitesun

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0 posted 2003-10-28 11:49 AM

You swam behind the willows
while I danced under the stars,
in midnight’s mist
my soul was kissed
by the mournful beauty
of your sacred cry.
For you are my spirit guide,
the caressing cries of true love
upon the shores of forevermore,
and when I hear the trills and lilts,
the cadence of your heartbeat,
I find myself in perfect peace,
enfolded within nature’s arms,
and I become part of the harmony
of timeless living art.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-10-28 11:55 AM

Midnitesun,
And you are part of all that.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-28 12:08 PM

Dear, we're on the same wavelength. I'm keeping yours, too.

garysgirl

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3 posted 2003-10-28 12:10 PM

This is beautiful, Kacy. I'm keeping it, too!!

Hugs

Ethel

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

4 posted 2003-10-28 12:15 PM

lucky girl you are

Midnitesun

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5 posted 2003-10-28 12:32 PM

Thanks, Friends!

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-10-28 02:35 PM

Lovely kacy

Castlehigh
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Beautiful isle of Éire

7 posted 2003-10-28 04:08 PM

Midnitesun,

Oh, this has beautiful imagery.

In particular, I like the lines,

"You swam behind the willows
while I danced under the stars,
in midnight’s mist
my soul was kissed
by the mournful beauty
of your sacred cry."

Something touching on the waters of eternity.

"I become part of the harmony
of timeless living art."

I like this idea of a 'living (he)art'

Thank you, Midnitesun.

Midnitesun

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8 posted 2003-10-28 05:09 PM

Thanks Raph!
And thank you Castlehigh, so glad to have you visit my poem today.

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

9 posted 2003-10-28 05:51 PM

The elation of euphoric rapture... an ecstatic place to be, no doubt...

-MVS

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http://educate-yourself.org/

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2003-10-28 06:12 PM

You swam behind the willows
while I danced under the stars,
in midnight’s mist
my soul was kissed
by the mournful beauty
of your sacred cry.
For you are my spirit guide,
the caressing cries of true love
==============================

beautiful Kacy...reads like a Monet whisper...
love the hints of rhyme and word play too.
lovely ethereal writing poetess MS

You're the color of the sky reflected in each store-front window pane ...
You're the whispering and the sighing of my tires in the rain.

J. Browne

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Canada eh.

11 posted 2003-10-28 06:29 PM

Oh my!! How beautiful this is Kacy!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Midnitesun

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12 posted 2003-10-29 07:39 AM

MArk, JM, Nancy
thank you for sharing my euphoria

Logan
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13 posted 2003-10-29 12:59 PM

Now, in this, very gentle smile, I heard the strains of a flute being played so softly. Excellent indeed

passing shadows
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14 posted 2003-10-29 01:01 PM

flowing beautifully

Edder
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15 posted 2003-11-02 10:36 AM

beautiful, Kacy. just beautiful.

littlewing
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16 posted 2003-11-02 11:01 AM

and within that cry . . .
you saw yourself
a feat of bravery and briliance
Kacy . . . you are not of this
PLACE
Thank God
xxoo

Midnitesun

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17 posted 2003-11-02 11:19 AM

LOL at your reply LWings, and some days I'd agree with that.

Logan, smiling back atcha, while listening to Carlos Nakai.

And thanking you for listening to my loon tune, Dixie and Edder.

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

18 posted 2003-11-02 12:17 PM

~Sigh~ such beautiful images.....you dance well Kacy...

Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

Midnitesun

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19 posted 2003-11-02 12:23 PM

thanking you for reading
and for that reply, Lauren

Mistletoe Angel

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20 posted 2003-11-02 03:46 PM

(smiles) Oh Kacy, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this was presented to me like some Rene Magritte painting with the reflections on the water, ones of laughter rippling across the surface! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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21 posted 2003-11-03 04:32 AM

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