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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2003-10-28 10:24 AM

Would that it could, my heart, explore
to the depths of desire, adore
beyond emotions, thought left behind
and bring to you, bountiful find

would that it could, my heart, give more
devotion, unbridled outpour
surpassing love, if unconfined
feast for heart, body, soul and mind

would that it could, my heart, implore
whisper softly, it’s you I live for
to all other’s, I remain blind
in every beat you are entwined

would that it could, my heart, as before
love you, love you, forevermore

~SEA~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-10-28 10:29 AM

A heart such as yours could love forevermore.

~ So 'love'ly, light, and lyrical.

HHH (Happy Halloween Hugs)
EA

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-28 10:30 AM

Welcome home, Susan! We've missed you AND your poetry! Dang girl, it's good to see you again!

SEA

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with you

3 posted 2003-10-28 10:32 AM

thank you EA

thanks Karilea, you know with all that is going on, I barely have time for myself, and I have missed getting in here SO MUCH!

Midnitesun

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Gaia

4 posted 2003-10-28 10:32 AM

WOW! it's been a while since I've read your words.
This is a beauty! especially
this:

quote:
it’s you I live for
to all other’s, I remain blind
in every beat you are entwined

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (10-28-2003 10:33 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-10-28 10:50 AM

SEA,
A lovely, lovely poem.

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2003-10-28 10:54 AM

Would that it could, my heart, explore
to the depths of desire, adore
====================================
would that it could, my heart, implore
whisper softly, it’s you I live for
to all other’s, I remain blind
in every beat you are entwined
======================================

I'd know those rhymes blindfolded...classic Sea-girl poetry...romantic and lovely.
Love the phrasing in this.
Good to see ya Susan!

You're the color of the sky reflected in each store-front window pane ...
You're the whispering and the sighing of my tires in the rain.

J. Browne

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-10-28 11:07 AM

"would that it could, my heart, as before
love you, love you, forevermore"

Susan..you have been SO missed!
It's great to read you once again.
~Luv, Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

vandana

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USA

8 posted 2003-10-29 05:37 PM

nice

Krawdad
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9 posted 2003-10-29 05:42 PM

and why not?

enjoyed the music, sea

PsychoticBunni
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Mythical Atlantis

10 posted 2003-10-29 05:43 PM

love is so rare. hold on to it forever. beautiful expressions, i can almost see the way you love him. whoever it is.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

Brad Majors

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Georgia

11 posted 2003-10-30 03:28 PM

beautiful

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2003-10-30 10:05 PM

Very lovely Sea....I can really sense the desire in this....

Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

13 posted 2003-10-30 10:50 PM

Sea, this is wonderful and I see I'm not the only one that's missed you around here...hope you back for awhile - missed your words...

jwesley

Mistletoe Angel

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14 posted 2003-11-01 03:37 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, and may your golden heart forever feel true love forever, as you are a heart that keeps on giving! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you would and you could, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

15 posted 2003-11-01 04:02 PM

SEA~
Thank you for this beautiful piece~
It's a perfect *gift* for this day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Dark Angel
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16 posted 2003-11-01 06:26 PM

I believe it could!

Lovely as always Sea. Nice to see you.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Duncan
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17 posted 2003-11-01 06:30 PM

"would that it could, my heart, give more
devotion, unbridled outpour
surpassing love, if unconfined
feast for heart, body, soul and mind"

JM already said it, but yes...classic SEA. I've missed you. This is why.

vandana

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USA

18 posted 2003-11-01 06:45 PM

nice

SEA

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with you

19 posted 2003-11-05 01:09 AM

thank you all for your sweet, thoughtful comments, I have missed you guys bunches!!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

20 posted 2003-11-05 07:57 PM

OMG Susan
this is breathtaking
Goddd . . I adore it
what an amazing writer you are
such grace and style
to admire
xxoo

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

21 posted 2003-11-05 08:18 PM

would that it could, my heart, implore
whisper softly, it’s you I live for
to all other’s, I remain blind
in every beat you are entwined

Susan, this is such beautiful writing.
I'm glad to see you back, too.

Hugs

Ethel

exhale
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since 2003-06-13

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Alberta,Canada

22 posted 2003-11-05 09:18 PM

that was so beautifull, call me a girly girl if you must but when a poem has such rythym it kinda makes me mist up a bit, you know?
incredible write

allamericanjoe
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since 2003-10-02

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Iredell county, NC

23 posted 2003-11-05 10:42 PM

beautiful poem! Bravo again! I love the way you write!! Wait, I think I said that in your last post. Oh well, truth is truth. Much enjoyed, thank you for sharing.

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~

LeeJ
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24 posted 2003-11-06 03:41 PM

creative peace rings through your words....
such lovely writes you project, the images always taking me away....thank you for sharing

Toerag
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Ala bam a

25 posted 2003-11-06 04:31 PM

Only a very very sweet person could write such a sweet poem....have you ever yelled at anyone?

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