A Girl and The Ghost Part 2 (repost from Open Poetry #23)

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Open Poetry #29

A Girl and The Ghost Part 2 (repost from Open Poetry #23)

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-27 11:43 PM

So the ghost sat
At the edge of her bed
He made no indent

He started to speak
And tell his story
"Her hair was as yellow
As yellow roses
Her eyes were as blue
As the deep blue sea
She was the most beautiful woman
I ever did see"
A smile came to his face

The girl said,
"Go on mister ghost.
I must hear more.
I want to hear
Everything."

He went on and said,
"I loved her
With my whole heart,
My whole soul
And my whole mind.
I did everything
She asked of me
Until I died."
He lowered his head sadly

Then the girl asked,
"How is it you died?
And why do you still haunt my room?
That is all I ask
For the moment kind ghost."

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I am doing this story in parts. I do hope you are enjoying Part 3 will be up tomorrow sometime.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-10-27 11:51 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this sounds like Casper, yay! (big hugggsssssss) It doesn't seem like a ghost that wants to scare anyone, just a sensitive gleaming opaline spirit! God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this series, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

2 posted 2003-10-27 11:54 PM

This ghost sounds like me after I finally bite the big one.

LOL

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2003-10-29 02:22 AM

This is sooo cool... I sure hope you got part 3 up... sending this back to the top!!!

Sherry

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