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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-27 10:22 PM


You may go relationship to relationship
And not find the right one
For years to come

But one day love comes into your life
With one introduction from a man
The one that has been in your dreams
The one that you have said prayers for

You have your fights
You have your nights of indecision
You have days were you just
Want to kill him
But you work through it eventually

Love never dies
Even if it doesn't last
For all eternity
And you have to move on
To a new man

You will always have the memory
Of the first man
You ever truly loved

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2003-10-27 10:23 PM


First loves are eternal Julie.
Wonderful write. TD

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2003-10-27 10:34 PM


You know, I've tried for years to decide if the first woman (actually a 5-year old girl that kissed me beneath the Ligustrum bushes many years ago)was the most important to me, or which one was (seeings I haven't forgotten ANY of them), and I've finally decided, more or less, they are all equally important to who I am as a man/human being because they have all given insight on how to be a better person (not that it's worked!!), and I love them all just as much now as I did then - in memory of course, honey, if you're reading this....

Now where was this going....

Loved the piece my friend,

jwesley (hmmm...now you're in my memory too...see how it works???)

ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
3 posted 2003-10-27 11:32 PM


It can be applied both ways, as I've proven. Seems a memory just can't be erased if it was to do with someone you care about.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2003-10-27 11:56 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Julie, I'm so happy you're thinking this way, sweet friend, I'm sorry to have heard of your recent heartache but in the end, you will only find a greater blessing of love! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I'm always here if you need me, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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