Open Poetry #29 |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass ![]() |
Dots I can’t stop thinking that if I could just connect the dots it might simplify get direct come down to a message as unambiguous as thrown pottery but I’m in it already the pattern drawn and infinitely complex all the lines shadings obvious: I have to find the dots. [This message has been edited by Ratleader (10-27-2003 04:41 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ed, just a comment. Bring in your words a little, sir - too MUCH space in-between, and my mind needs more than dots to connect them. But I surely enjoyed what you had to say. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes we connect all the dots and don't like the picture we see in front of us. *S* I like this very much, my friend... You found enough dots to draw curves using only straight lines. *S* |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hi Sunshine -- you right, a good catch....I drew things in a bit and it does look better! Ho Ruthie (sorry, had to get a Ho to match the Hi for Sunshine....) I had that epiphany last night, watching the ash fall, and trying to make patterns out of it....There Ain't No Blankety-Blank Pattern! But man oh man are there dots...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... Thanks for explaining that... LOL I thought I'd been promoted! *G* Perhaps no pattern... but portraits in the dots, my friend... that you found and shared. |
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Sunshine
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
When I connect the dots I wind up with a lot of closed in boxes, but if I doodle I once came up with a teapot. Is there meaning to this I don't know. I guess, doodle and look at all the beauty you can find in so many shades and colors. Oh! Dear! I'm sounding serious. See Ya Love Bon-Bon ![]() |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...When it rains, I see the patterns the drops make on the cement....sort of like watching clouds...there are no doubt patterns in ash too. I will have to look more closely. Stay safe! Hugs! |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Of course the real patterns are in life, and the things of life that confound me.....so many dots, so many lines..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Enjoyed this |
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