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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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..for each flower gains the mist of purgatory within it's walls of petal. There swings the rope on trees that follow not, the hanging ghost of men, weeping.. ..for sins are like triumphs against false idols, rules were made to be broken.. We would not let ourselves be commanded by the advocate. So speaks a voice within, they say is evil, but I studder through demonic requiem.. This is nothing I would aquire without the lack of judgement. ..for death, is the neccesity of life, though denied and looked down upon as the shunned by god. ..and here hums a hollow tree..murder.. lust not be breached and made into love, or sacrificed by the songs of a haven in which our souls escape.. ..for a flower..each flower.. has the shapen lathe of heaven, and the breath of hell. |
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Third Libra Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 125South Carolina |
Very much an amazing tapestry of words, woven so masterly. Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
so much you've woven into the simplicity of a flower, truly exquisite |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
..for sins are like triumphs against false idols, rules were made to be broken.. you read minds |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
even the flower is not truth? or is it all truth? the flower's truth is to bloom |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... and the blood of so many tears ... beauty is what beauty writes a flower holds so many of lifes little secrets! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent poetry, Bravo! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
When I am older and greyer...perhaps I will have lost the bit of life that makes me want to write like this... but I doubt that..and I know it will not in time ever match the things I have read from you... regardless.. I know I will never tire of reading such as this... many regards... and great respect for your words.. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
did I forget to reply? baad Liz! bad! poof..this is good like the sweet stuff only it tastes better. umm yeah..I liked it What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
meg you got it right here: Heaven and Hell defined: ..for a flower..each flower.. has the shapen lathe of heaven, and the breath of hell. darkly loving xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"lust not be breached and made into love, or sacrificed by the songs of a haven in which our souls escape.." I am always at a loss for words when I read yours.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Whew....!! Amazing work. Eric |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
You just said it all, lady. Yet another keeper from Kaoru. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
not only profetic but very very wise...excellent write  |
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