Open Poetry #29 |
Foggy Seas |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The nets where all stowed The slight chop rocked them gently, Homeward bound, Homeward bound, The stern mist carries swiftly Gather fog as flowed, Rolling in, Rolling in, Before the sun showed, Followed into port quickly, Rolling in, Homeward bound. Gloom |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This reminds me of those dark--dark nights, the fog rolling in the chill in the air.....almost spooky....I really enjoyed the images in this... Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember the names |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my! ~ My poem inspired this lovely one? I am honoured, Dear Professor! Thank you for the compliment and thank you posting such a lovely poem. Your talent has many facets to it! ~ and I especially loved the facet that was illustrated with this right write! Happy Halloween Huggums, EA |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Gloomy, I so love sea tales! You did this so well! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice write...made me feel like I was there |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor Good metaphor glad you made port. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Greeneyes, Pleased you enjoyed. Thank you, Earth Angel, I am glad you like it, It is so easy for me to think of the Sea, Your poem was just the right spark this poem needed. Thank you, Susan Caldwell, So do I, glad you responded, Sea tales, ahhh yes, I remember once when talking to this little mermaid a lovely creature with lovely blue eyes… Thank you, passing shadows, You are very kind in response Thank you, Seymour, Always nice to see your response under a poem of mine, In fact I might use a touch of port a little later. Gloom |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
You write like you a sailor and poet, I would greet your ship arrival if the sailor had such a poem to share |
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