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C_ROK06
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since 2003-10-23
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0 posted 2003-10-24 05:23 PM



I feel ashamed when I’m around you
I feel that you see right through me
You see into my soul
Nothing is really a secret with you
You know it all

When your gaze is fixed upon me,
I quickly look away
Afraid of what you might see there
I try to hide
But I can’t

I sense your longing to speak with me
To tell me all you know of me
But I hesitate
Keep our conversations short

Afraid of what you might say
That it will hurt
But I think I already know
I know what you’re thinking
Because I see it too
I know what you do

And now that I don’t see you everyday,
Just once a week
It’s easier to ignore
Ignore the pain I feel
But buried deep in my mind,
I know it’s still there

Presured,
Alone,
Depressed,
Angry,
That is how I feel
So I cry out
Cry out to in whom my trust resides
And He helps me through this
Through another
That one may not be you
But I will never forget

Never forget how you helped me,
Realize what was wrong
Thank you

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2003-10-24 05:40 PM


Very heartfelt writing Victoria, enjoyed much and welcome to passions.
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-10-24 07:11 PM


A wonderful way to say thank you.Welcome to Passion's.
Crystal

C_ROK06
Junior Member
since 2003-10-23
Posts 49

3 posted 2003-10-27 07:06 PM


thank you guys! ^_^ I'm glad to be here.
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