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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Sea green splash I met him there standing, shyly hiding to the side of the doorjam peeking over the edge just to see him doing the very same thing back to me One look into my eyes his eyes and I knew we both knew that in that very instant we were where we belonged within this sight embraced in time distance traveled a roadmap of peaks and valley hill and sea sand and silt Hand to palm a joining clasping pencil, marking our journey from x to y Back Home [This message has been edited by littlewing (10-23-2003 10:56 AM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And now the fun begins...  learning that alphabet - Oh goodie I get to go to N'Arlins eventually! I am busting out of my britches here in happiness of course  Have a wonderful, wonderful time you two!Carpe' Diem |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is beautiful...and I'm grinning from ear to ear! I am SO happy for you both!! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue...coming home is just the right way to feel. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh Sue this is absolutely beautiful. The best to you both. *big smiles*  Maree  fate is not just |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The very moment. Thank you for bringing it here, so we can share for a moment, just how good things can be. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Aaaaaaawwwwwwww, Sue and Ed..... I didn't know this was back here. You know, LittleOne that I am so very, very happy for you two...and Gary is, too!!!! We know exactly how the two of you feel. Isn't it wonderful finally "meeting" (for real)? Especially after you have started out as friends, and then became best friends...and then fell in love. Nothing can compare with that, can it? Love and hugs to you both, Ethel |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Mmm Hmmm See what happens? She keeps me prisoner in a hotel room for days and I didn't get to see this til I got back home... (It really was like this poem, wasn't it baby?)  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hand to palm a joining clasping pencil, marking our journey from x to y ~&~ Don't you love it when you're not only on the same page but the same road? Hugs! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
One look into my eyes his eyes and I knew we both knew that in that very instant we were where we belonged within this sight the eyes say it all, don't they? glad to see you home |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
we both knew that in that very instant we were where we belonged I'm so glad for you both... *S* |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
She tied you up, did she Ed...hmmm, i could have guessed. Jason |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
She did what to you? I need more details. Maybe we should start from A to C. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sharon? Carpe Diem never meant more to me than it does now the alphabet sheesh . . . Nawlins . . . *smile* thank you Nancy - you are so sweet My God thank you for reading Martie, Good God YES indeed thank you Maree - hugs right back to you Lady thank you awww Ed you are so sweet - thank you for that, I am grateful that you guys are liking the sharing Ethel EXACTLY! and thank you, yes best friends first so so very important laid the groundwork, it did *smile* Eddie? Kept you prisoner sheesh like that was real hard to do and yes, it truly was like this smiling at your eyes . . . SMMOCHES . . . God yes Kari , been on this same ole road wayy too long doing donuts thank you Michele - yes they sure do and soon soon that wind will call to you as you so need to hear yourself . . thank you aww suthern thank you so much Jason Lyle! Hey! LOL yea it was a real struggle to lasso this one . . . *laughing* thank you Thanks guys xxoo ahahahahah Julia I just saw your reply oh nooo he is the magic man . . . I am innocent completely innocent . . . *smile* thank you - your brother? My God a beautiful man [This message has been edited by littlewing (10-27-2003 10:15 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"we were where we belonged" Doesn't get any better then that.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it happens like that huh? okay, I'll believe it and just wait some more...lol beautiful writing Sue |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
Sue-you have written such a beautiful poem, reminds me of my girl, ah, i think i might show thios to her, but i a def. adding this, great write "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sue, this is beautiful. Fate has a way of stepping in and taking you to a place you never expected to be. I'm so happy for you both!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This write goes into my library right where it belongs.   It's a good thing I left Tuesday and didn't meet with you. LOL, you two would not have had time for me anyway. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
like fluffy cotton, soft and beautiful... Smilin' at ya!! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Home baby, yes That is where I found myself... Home in your arms....sanctuary Isle of view Susie SMMOCH! "In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan? you are so right, thank you Dix? YES truly, I swear to you *smile* thank you Hey Matt - thank you so much, how sweeet God thank you so much , yes please do, I would be honored *smile* thank you Sharon and yes, fate sure does, knocked me on me arse from behind, in a good way Kacy - ohh mannn . . . we would have had a riot! Thank you so much, you are so so good to me Thank you Barry, smiling right back Hey Eddie? SMMOCHES to you and yes it is isn't it? a sanctuary . . . isleofviewarebeautiful Thanks guys xxoo |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Bravo! Very sweet. Congradulations to you both littlewing. Anything else I would say...the others already said! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, in love you never need maps and just knowing there are destinations always in impromptu makes the journey worthwhile! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sue This was such a fabulous piece of writing. I loved it. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"that in that very instant we were where we belonged within this sight embraced in time" The stuff poetry is made of and life realizes, if you're lucky. You two make me smile. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Verse so so much you have said quite enough *smile* Right Noah, so right you are - in love you never need maps, I couldn't have said it better thank you Hey Sue! God I miss you . . . thank you so much Dunc? we are lucky . . . thank you so much Thanks guys xxoo |
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