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wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2003-10-26 11:42 PM

We were
as it would happen
well met

Upon opening the door
in greeting

We had faced the possibility
that all was not
as we had hoped

That within that first embrace
there could be
awkward angles
and difficult edges

And the chance
that eyes would shine, doubt

But
as it would happen
we were very well met

Indeed

"In looking Northward, I see a light"

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

1 posted 2003-10-26 11:47 PM

Great writing Ed, I could not be happier for you two, and you both shine in your writing of each other.

Jason

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2003-10-26 11:54 PM

Thank you Jason
For all of your support for us in this venture.

And thanks to all that have wished us well!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2003-10-27 12:03 PM

indeed !!!

this is like a live movie...pass the popcorn..and the tissues...h

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-10-27 12:07 PM

It's good to see this, to know that the ole hermit has found the missing part of himself.

And good to see your talent as impressive in this kind of expression as it is in just about everything else.

Well done, Ed!
And well written.

-Ed

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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-10-27 12:09 PM

damn, where is that tissue box!!!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-10-27 01:46 AM

And the chance
that eyes would shine, doubt

But
as it would happen
we were very well met

Indeed

Ed, the eyes always shoe the truth...they can't lie, so....all is well, indeed!!!!

and

to both of you,
Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-10-27 04:04 AM

sigh

PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

8 posted 2003-10-27 04:14 AM

Like you didn't know? I knew the second I talked to her. I feel so warm inside for your meeting well. I love you.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2003-10-27 06:17 AM

I think you were also
well received.

Well done!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

10 posted 2003-10-27 08:06 AM

Smiling...for both of you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2003-10-27 09:22 AM

*Smiling at the two of you!*

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2003-10-27 09:27 AM

Ed...smiles and hugs!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

13 posted 2003-10-27 09:40 AM

Lying before me
for years . .
green velvet carpet
strewn with irregular shapes
cardboard pieces of my life
laughing at me as I grasped
each one slightly
ever so slightly
Attempting to fit them perfectly
into the grooves
of the one before
only failing
succeeding at only the outer edges
a framework
of what was to be my life
sight unseen, fate unknown

The day I opened that door
a palm was held out to me
and within that hand
I glimpsed the piece
THAT piece
missing
the one that left a hole, weeping
upon the green velvet
lain upon my table
smiling
I placed it where it belonged
and before me
outlined
the puzzle finally had been completed

I love you Eddie
you are a beautiful man
Thank you everyone for sharing this
*smiling* at all of you

Baby?

Julia? you know your brother well
*smile*
xxoo

PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

14 posted 2003-10-27 10:07 AM

Sue.... I have tears falling down my cheeks. I swear this to be true. Damn girl, you got me good.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

15 posted 2003-10-27 10:57 AM

aww now Im going to cry . . Good Lord
you are a beautiful soul
just like your brother
I am so grateful . . .
xxoo

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

16 posted 2003-10-27 03:11 PM

Julia?

I cant wait to meet you too
*smile*
xxoo

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

17 posted 2003-10-27 03:19 PM

There are moments when all I can say is

"life is good."

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

18 posted 2003-10-27 04:59 PM

Yup Karen, life is good!

Still smiling here Bro

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

19 posted 2003-11-05 01:54 AM

*breathe, again*

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

20 posted 2003-11-05 09:26 AM

Things are lookin' goooood!

"Day three", here I come...

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