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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-26 10:42 PM


I know that I am sick
That I may have an incurable illness
That I will have to deal with
For the rest of my life

But remember the way I was
When I was happy and not so sick
Remember the good times
And not the bad

Remember everything we did together
Not what we can't do now
Because of this damned illness
That makes me not think straight anymore
because of all the pain I am in

I'm just a little unwell
But with the constant pain
I feel I might die
Even though I know it isn't an illness
That kills
Just remember the good times
For my sake please

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2003-10-26 10:52 PM


I know you aren't the only one suffering from such pain, but I know what a pain an illness can be.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
2 posted 2003-10-27 12:24 PM


its always a comfort,
when someone remembers the good of us...
for us.

Said well

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-10-27 12:30 PM


Healing thoughts on the way, Julie.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2003-10-27 04:11 AM


remembering the good times is important

peace to you Julie

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