Open Poetry #29 |
Survival of the Fittest |
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Survival of the Fittest The fruit did not survive the rape; The birds took every single grape. It's not the birds, but I to blame; God treats us all the very same. He gave us all the ready sign; The birds obeyed, I ignored mine. I knew the ripening was due, But days were busy, hours were few For me to take my plucking shears And pick the heavy laded spears. I toyed with them, had a taste And vowed that none would go to waste. I waited for the sun to shine When leisurely, I would pick mine And then allow the birds the few That for my purpose, would not do. Those birds were much more sly than I. They knew those grapes were for to die. Now as I wipe away a tear, "I will do better, come next year." Joyce 10/26/03 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This was an awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
tardyness has few rewards learn from the early birds lol arthur |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwwwww, but at least you knew and next year you will do just that and both you and the birds will win, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joyce, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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whispering wind Junior Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 45 |
This was wonderful. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
reminds me of the tortoise and the hare... and then there was a story about a squirrel who saved up all the acorns.... Yeah, I have been down that same path a few times... Thanx for a wise and nicely written write. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow is this ever a reminder about procrastinate. Wow. Love, Terri~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The grapes of wrath, heh? To not pick a bushel after all that work, and waiting so patiently! Hope those ravens appreciated their feast. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! great wisdom here! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Excellent example of responsibility learned and superbly penned. Can’t blame the natural order of things for our own neglect. Thanks, Melton |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wonderful poem! ~ but that must have been soooo disappointing not to have been able to collect the fruits of your labour! ~ Here's to you claiming your grape crop next year! Lovin' hugs, Linda P.S. Remember that ye must reap thy crop lest it be raped! [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-27-2003 09:01 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Joyce, I never know when my fruit is ripe until a blue bird makes a drill. LOL Enjoyed your poem. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Sighs...I am always late, to reap the benefits, I understand this one. Jason |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah this was a lesson to us all Joyce, that indeed the early bird does catch the worm. I watched the squirrels eat all the hazelnuts of the tree here, LOL, so I know the pain of loosing this game too! Those animals are smarter than we are - remember the story of the ants, and the grasshopper? I tell that to the kids all the time to get them to pick up their toys, and if they don't hurry, I will give them to someone who will appreciate them (mean huh?) Well, now we will both have to be a raven or a worm next year that is all there is too it. Happy Harvest Next Year Joyce! Carpe' Diem |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Isn't that the way? Plucked too soon, and the fruit just doesn't taste right; wait for the moment, and bird of prey have had their way... I'll remind you next year, a day or so before the anniversary of this post! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thanks everyone. But in self defense the wind was horrendous for several days and then we had a flood and I had to evacuate. The birds persevered. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: Enjoyed your poem very much and do send it along to Gary Drury. I think he'll enjoy it. Reminds me of my own tardiness in gathering apples. A bear got almost all of them, but perhaps it will give him a happy hibernation! I was waiting for them to turn a bit redder! Betty Lou Hebert |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Joyce enjoyed the read and the message within |
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