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ecrivan
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0 posted 2003-10-25 11:15 PM



Time to use an old pen name
it comes and goes from my mind frame
and is set after poems to delight the viewer
or follows serious ones to ingnite an abuser...

I mean a person with unsettled thoughts about himself
would rather read something about somebody else
but the pen name covers topics large and wide
and curiosty gets the best of he who would hide...

yet there is a service for he who weakens to fall
this pen name serves to address the man on the ball
that if he is keen to stay a nimble player of sports as he is
he ought to respect a sewer's thimble that is different from his.

Time to use an old pen name
that enters my mind now and again
to delight the child, victim of an abuser
enlighten adults who see themselves as losers


there is a service for he who smokes and yearns to stop
a message for those who'd sooner drink tea and ban the pop
time to consider the purpose of ones brief life
and life to consider the purpose of one's short time...

such a clever use of words to spin more poems
the pen name signs petitions as the poet roams
to bring attention to worlds we will painfully miss
as if we'd kicked a child to bed without a kiss.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (10-26-2003 05:33 PM).]

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SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-10-25 11:24 PM


WOW!
Terri~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-10-26 01:37 AM


definitely thought-provoking
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-10-26 04:14 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I really did think my pen name through before joining Passions, and because it was Christmas I was in the spirit and I thought about all the children of the world who do get kicked out of the house without supper, who don't have warm clothes and beds, and it made me think Christmas just isn't enough to give! I believe its lessons of giving and sharing should be practiced everyday, for Christmas spirit is always, and the name "Mistletoe Angel" was born, kind of a resemblance of hope for giving 24/7 to these children of the world and being a representative of it! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, pen-names always mean everything and I believe you can tell a lot about a person by one, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-26-2003 04:15 PM).]

ecrivan
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4 posted 2003-10-26 05:36 PM


Would be just the right thing if an Xmas spirit was practiced regularly...bravo on your pen name Noah!


ecrivan
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5 posted 2003-10-26 05:38 PM


Am always looking for new topics Passing Shadows, thanks for your read Sarah


garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-10-27 04:47 AM


Your poems are always thought-provoking to me.....
and that is a good thing.  
Hugs  
Ethel

ecrivan
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7 posted 2003-10-27 10:30 PM


I've learnt to be content by the reading of a few
and grasp the value of critique from moderators like you

  copyright 2003 ecrivan


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (10-27-2003 10:32 PM).]

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