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arthur
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since 2001-08-14
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england

0 posted 2003-10-26 04:00 PM



Death and Hope

I see Death,that old black knight.
He beckons me to his endless night.

I have much to do,thinks are planned!
He shakes his head and grasps my hand,
And points my way to his silent land.

Surely there can be some delay?
Ways by which I can extend my stay?
He shakes his head,I must come away.

Slowly now as all men must,
My body turns from flesh to dust.
A plaything for some wayward gust.

I had hope of Eternal Life,
Free of sickness and of strife.
Beyond death some pure new light ?

As my final breath draws near,
I start to see those I once held dear.
Joyfully now I may banish fear.

How good it is these friends to see
This  sprit ,once flesh ,is newly me.

Dear God I place my trust in thee!

arthur 10/03

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-10-26 04:21 PM


Well done Michael...even in our Halloween orange...
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs across the pond~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
2 posted 2003-10-26 05:10 PM


Well done Arthur!! Very thought provoking.

believe in what your heart feels...

Magnus
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3 posted 2003-10-26 05:30 PM


A humbling subject,  one which lingers in
all our minds....for anyone who strongly
believes...it is their salvation and moment
when a first step is take toward life
eternal...

Yes,  hope.

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-10-26 09:10 PM


Beautiful...
Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-10-27 04:36 AM


well, I'm ready...no extended stay will I ever ask for
Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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6 posted 2003-10-27 04:43 AM


very enknightening!  Especially liked your first and second verse.   They swept me away at once.
                          Sadelite

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