Open Poetry #29 |
Can You Guess Who/What I Am? (A Senryu Game For Halloween - Come and Play?) |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~* What Or Who Am I? *~ Time for Halloween. So let's all have us some fun, Want to play a game? On “All Hallow’s Eve”, Tell us what you are wearing By writing a poem. Since I thought this up Then I will have to go first. Ready? Guess what I am ... Four feet on the ground, Sneak but never make a sound Except if I howl. * * That one was easy, Did you get the idea? It is your turn now. Happy Hauntings To You Everyone! [This message has been edited by Mysteria (10-25-2003 08:14 PM).] |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
This is just to cool. Right at the moment you wouldn't want to know what I'm wearing. Since I have a cold I look like something the cat dragged in. Happy writing. The Chocolate Monster is in the house. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
I come from the grave Of a cardboard suburb town Look out, I'm wild! (smiles) Oh Sharon, this is a wonderful idea, I love this challenge, hehehe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-25-2003 08:28 PM).] |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
One-eyed king of old Feathered friend my company Seven is my home. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, I'm not wearing anything cuz Balladeer scared the pants off me! LOL, good thing I don't have a cam on this PC. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I scared Mister Ribbits the frog off the fallen log in the bog and the neighbor’s dog squealed like a stuck hog when he looked up at me in the chilling fog. Now, who or what can I be? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well...if you were overseas you could be the Loch Ness Monster, or if you were here you could be a Susquatch. then again if you are down south you could be an alligator, but if you were around me you could be a MOUSE! Eeek! Well, perhaps you are the moon? I give up, what are you? LOL |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
He's a caped villan with teeth to bite awakened from his casket after the light a doer of cursed deeds that casts a spell untold misery plagues man or woman that hear his knell.. if they lived by day, now they rises at night to follow his commandment at the first starlight you'd notice a glaze in their eyes as they approached and wonder about their purpose as fear encroached... it began as a legend of a ruthless prince, we're told he'd cut off the heads of enemies, mount them on poles he'd turn into a wolf or a bat if it mattered a change of form when his spirit was battered... but you could keep the molesting spirit at bay with a cross in his face his legs would sway or a wreath of garlic around windows of your room to prevent his entrance and the moment of your doom. Happy Trick or Treat!! [This message has been edited by ecrivan (10-26-2003 12:50 AM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
What fun!! Who Am I? I'm black and I'm furry And hang out with a witch. You'll have some bad luck If you see my tail switch. Halloween is my favorite Time of the year. I'm really a good guy You need have no fear. Keep playing. Joyce |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, hint: what's in a name? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martin...I see you got your name back!! Are you talking about Dracula? . Joyce are you one of these pretty things? I love my black cat. His name is Baby. LOL . Kacy, I have no idea who you are. LOL . Hey, this is fun, Sharon. I'm going to write one. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
There are many of them out there They are around everywhere Walls they walk through They will REALLY scare you Don't disturb them and they won't bother you But a fright you will get if you do Haunted houses are where they dwell They all have a story to tell Now, I fly around saying BOO!! But I want to play, not scare you All I'm doing is having fun For I am the FRIENDLY ONE~~ Who Am I??? [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-26-2003 03:54 PM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Kacy is nothing! Joyce is a black cat, Ecrivan is indeed Dracula, and Ethel you are one scary ghost, right? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
May I? I close up by day Open only at night No, I’m not a bat To give you a fright! Trust me, it’s true, You would never see If it were not for Simple, little me! What am I? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon, remember Casper, the Friendly ghost? That one's me. LOL |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok Sharon this is a reach but to me it sounds like you are your third eye for Halloween up there . . . Blue velvet sash holds tress blowing breeze whispering "Walk this path back home" heh |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, Ethel, I don't know either Sharon? look!up in the sky, it's a bird, it's a plane, no it's.....ROTFL shaking my head here in laughter guess again |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A mouse with wings, I fly at night. My pointy teeth Search necks to bite. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Earth Angel...you're dressed as my ex-wife??? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
ahahahahaha Kacy...that reminded me of a joke I heard. LOL I'd better not tell it here, though...... But, it can't be Superman, can it? |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
Who Am I? dead and long gone no one left to remember i used to wander the streets indestructable with my gun loaded and my thugs right on hand i'm not one to be messed with |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nope,Ethel, not the dude in the cape LOL, I think this post is going to go to several pages Sharon, be ready, we are just getting warmed up |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Okay I got who Earth Angel is, still can't figure out what Kacy is, and no one got who I am or who is wandering the streets with a gun at his side unremembered - hmmmmm? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Soft as feathered lace creep around on tiny feet multiples of two. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Did I stump everybody? No one has guessed me yet, hehehe! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sharon, if you guessed 'vampire bat', you guessed correctly! What a fun post! I've been really enjoying looking and reading at all the replies! This is a hit post, Dear Sharon! HHH Linda |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
A test in rhyme is what you ask? I vow this person is your task. A sickly youth was this one’s lot; He toughened out and grew a lot. As dutiful son, he went to work And found a job as government clerk. But writing was his heart’s desire; The stories came out, quire by quire. When London’s Lyceum came to call He took bride Florence for a ball. Tho’ many’s the tale he aptly wove There’s one which gets your heart to move. Dang...this is supposed to be Senryu. Oops, let me try again. Through rubble and trouble and dark of night The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light [This message has been edited by kayjay (10-27-2003 10:13 PM).] |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I hope this is a bit more like you had in mind? What a great challenge! Ken A puzzle in rhyme It’s mysterious in time Worth more than a dime Born in Ireland Where he grew to be a man Writing gave him fans But being nervous Within the civil service Still tried to serve us. His stories were good; They could scare us like they should, Now just think of wood. To London he went With his lovely bride, Florence. His writing made cents. Who is he? Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sharon, you ignored me!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Noah, I am having trouble with what everyone else is too, hang in there I am still thinking and that is hard on this little brain of mine. Hmmm, I am stuck on 3 of you - whomever or whatever you are? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Balladeer, you mean people can ignore you I am still thinking - the only king I can think of that had one eye was Balor, the God of Death in irish folklore, so I know that is not you right? Dracula is too easy and not right, is it? See, confused that is all. KayJay you have me stumped too, and I am thinking about this too, good thing I didn't say wear masks or I would be really confused by now. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Death is love, love is death, My love I would die for, give unto him my last breath! Who am I? Happy Halloween! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I KNOW!!! Noah? You are wearing a...SMILE. and Sharon? is wearing...TEN DIFFERENT SHADES OF NAIL POLISH... sigh. That was LAST year... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What am I? creature of the night my eyeballs solidly fixed on those of my breed mesmerized by black the white avoiding my eyes sunset paints the blue What am I? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah Liz is a bat, and Karen ... blondes too have "lightbulb" moments, hint, hint. Okay you people who were so crafty, don't keep us in suspense - what are you? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
No, It is not a bat! It is a PIP poet! (And you are so hard to fool - thought you would get it right away) The blue pages have turned to sunset orange. Alright! I mystified Mysteria! Yes! Fun Game, but Noah had me stumped Liz |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hideous nose, beady eyes, horrific teeth and razor sharp nails across the board... he who haunts the sleep. I didn't do this right, did I? Oooops! [This message has been edited by Magnus (10-28-2003 05:15 PM).] |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Be it Halloween? Rightly do I preen. Am I to add a clue? Maybe offer a hint to you? Soft at night, my creature swells To inflict his fearsome spells Often too, he might, perhaps Keep the bodies from their caps Early morn will bring him home Really now, you know him too! Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
This is waaaay off the ball...but.... kayjay...are you William Carlos Williams? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
KayJay how about Count Dracula? Romantic Heart - hmmmm, Juliet? Magnus - eek! Are you a nasty rat? I am working on the rest, they are tough. Balladeer and Noah have me stumped. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sharon, are you a pair of cuddly Hush Puppies? LOL the midnight sun is up all night scarin half the crypt with her untimely bright light |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
BOO!!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sharon, are you a security guard of some sort? |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
One-eyed king of old Feathered friend my company Seven is my home. I'm just your average pirate, patch over eye, parrot on shoulder, traveling the seven seas |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
In darkness of night Disappearing with daylight My kiss lingers on [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-29-2003 11:57 AM).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mysteria you didn't guess mine so here is another hint Drifting on the wind weaving dew caught tapestries shivering in death |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Way up high, mattressed Pillows fluffed, still no sleeping Bruised, I lay, awake. Who am I? |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love this Mysteria! Absolutely love it and I love everyone's reply's. This is really great. Alas I don't get to enjoy Halloween this year. I'll be laying in bed after having surgery in the morning! Have a great one though people! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
aha! Sunshine is the princess in the princess and the pea story |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
My "Who am I" came to be more puzzling than I thought. So now I'll tell who I had in mind I guess I really ought. I thought my acrostic clue Would tell it all to you. ..My mystery man is Bram Stoker Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Midnitesun knows her tales... Covered, fur & cap Time for mice, but not a nap Hiding under chairs Who am I? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Why you are Sunshine The Cat! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Gentle Spirit are you dew? Paula are you spider webs? Michael, I got that the FIRST day, but figured it was way too easy, and you are always hiding things in those words of yours, who would have thought you would be straight up LOL (don't go there!) O-kay KayJay, as Sharon runs to see who the heck that is. LOL You guys are great I haven't had this much fun in a long time. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my! KayJay he wrote Dracula! I will go stand in the corner for not knowing that one. Now this leaves who here - Noah, and you have not figured out what I am - and I am actually going to wear it! LOL |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Close, but not quite, Mysteria...you're on the right track. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Not the dew of morn But a thief in the darkness Banished from the light Dark kiss eternal Immortality is yours In night I return (and that's the last hint I am giving...) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Why you are a beautiful vampiress? |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Miss Mysteria...don't forget to properly identify my mysteriousness... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
vampiress? ah...you have found me out... beautiful.....I dont know about all that, but they say beauty is in the eye of the beholder... GO GET YOUR EYES CHECKED LADY!!! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
No corners for you, Ms M You don't belong in them. But pat yourself upon the back For bringing out in me, the hack! Thanks for a great posting. What a neat response! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Put all together with wire By evil doctor He surpised them all He started having feelings I became his wife Who are we?? [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-29-2003 04:37 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Frankenstein and wife. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
yep, from the movie, Frankenstein and His Bride... too easy LOL |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's OK. I'm still waiting for Mysteria to guess my second offering. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mysteria...not quite Spinning silken threads Eight legged beauty am I welcome to my ...net |
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