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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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Nashville

0 posted 2003-10-25 06:03 PM


Yelling from the balcony like some
mad, idiot sevant with all the thrills
of being ashamed of my adrenaline
induced format coming close to fruition.
"I AM THE GOD OF NOTHING", lest I
feel slightly better at this outburst
perhaps a lasting ring of pain
can inulge my senses to life.
Yelling down to the street life
walking by ignoring me, their
own worlds a bland look of
psychotic memories they cannot escape.
Wonder upon wonders cut my
sound between us, and let them
go, unwilling to understand
that life is so much better.
I forgive others but not myself
in a foolish examine of why I
see things in slight convergence
when others see nothing but paper.

© Copyright 2003 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-10-26 01:44 PM


This is a powerful poem. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-10-26 02:39 PM




(big hugggssssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, I only wish everyone could listen to their hearts and find that instrument reverberating within as only then could we sing in universal harmony and not have to have that burdening feeling within! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-26-2003 02:39 PM).]

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