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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-10-25 03:41 PM




Paper Roses

        



                                             A gift of endless time
                                                         Telling, of friendship, honor,
                                                                            Loyalty, more

                                             In actuality, real fades, withers, dies,
                                                         Silk is nice, but gathers dust
                                                                            In time

                                             Plastic is not for me,
                                                         But paper roses

                                             Hold a scent,
                                                            Place well beneath a pillow
                                                                            Clasping dreams

                                             Gift me then,
                                                            Paper roses
                                                                            In loyalty.




[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-25-2003 03:47 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-25 04:09 PM


Beautiful poem KJ.  Says and lot,  and is
so true....

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2 posted 2003-10-25 05:13 PM


Paper, plastic, silk or real
The giver's incentive is the deal
For even though petals might fade
A place within our heart is made
Where all bouquets that love has sent
Never lose color, shape or scent.

I like your beautiful poem very much, Sunshiney One. *S*

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3 posted 2003-10-25 06:36 PM




(big hugggssssssss) No matter how the paper folds, it is still a rose and paper represents just the same as the real thing, as it doesn't wither the same way as seeing something natural wither! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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4 posted 2003-10-26 03:37 AM


I'll take paper any time over real, silk, or plastic

good write

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5 posted 2003-10-26 06:29 AM


This is very beautiful, Karilea.  It holds a special meaning for me...some words said long ago, he didn't understand. Yes, paper roses would have made a difference.

Patricia

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6 posted 2003-10-26 10:05 AM


Very sweet...

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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