Open Poetry #29 |
Paper Roses |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A gift of endless time Telling, of friendship, honor, Loyalty, more In actuality, real fades, withers, dies, Silk is nice, but gathers dust In time Plastic is not for me, But paper roses Hold a scent, Place well beneath a pillow Clasping dreams Gift me then, Paper roses In loyalty. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-25-2003 03:47 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful poem KJ. Says and lot, and is so true.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Paper, plastic, silk or real The giver's incentive is the deal For even though petals might fade A place within our heart is made Where all bouquets that love has sent Never lose color, shape or scent. I like your beautiful poem very much, Sunshiney One. *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) No matter how the paper folds, it is still a rose and paper represents just the same as the real thing, as it doesn't wither the same way as seeing something natural wither! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'll take paper any time over real, silk, or plastic good write |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is very beautiful, Karilea. It holds a special meaning for me...some words said long ago, he didn't understand. Yes, paper roses would have made a difference. Patricia |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very sweet... "if you won't let me fall for you |
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