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Echo
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Breezing thru the stripped branches, the sound of an xylophone singing to me thru the grey chill of morning. Why must I follow the wind still? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
it's just what your inner spirit needs for survival |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perhaps for the same reason as I put on Celtic music when I can on early Saturday mornings. Perhaps it is because we are gypsies at heart. Enjoyed the brevity of this, because it leaves so much room to ponder with you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Perhaps you are looking for the bird of paradise.  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Oh, sweet nymph, be careful Perhaps it is the song of Narsisis You hear "breezing through the stripped branches" That sings to you sweet nothings Perhaps it is better "you follow The wind still" further "In the grey chill of the morning" * "Sweet Echo, sweetest nymph, that liv'st unseen Within thy aery shell By slow Meander's margent green. And in the violet-embroidered vale, Where the love-lorn nightingale Nightly to thee her sad song mourneth well" * Milton...exert, from "Lady's song in Comus" * Well done, inkgoddesss ......ice..... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What color in the tone of your chosen words... As I looked into the heavy morning air...I could feel the wet of anticipation... Fly. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
why can't we ever stop questioning ourselves like this? life might be a little easier then. good writing Michele |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading and the thoughtful feedback |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Why must I follow the wind still? Cause sometimes, thats all there is! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
It's part of your energy.. Great writing, Michele. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Remember what Tolkien said "All that wander is not lost." I remind myself of that,too.  Terri~  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Because we are all children of the wind and when you hear the xylophone within you know it's a melody you can trust! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
because it calls you back home Michele . . . I adore this write xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
be thankful its not a tuba..seriously though beautiful mish |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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