Open Poetry #29 |
Leaves |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The leaf Fluttered Shuddered Withered Wept. The poet penned passion upon page’s leaf, then Fluttered, Shuddered Withered Wept. October gave up her leaves. The poet closed her book, and vanished. ~*~ In memory. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Now here Karilea..is another example of the ones you pen which make my breath catch in my throat. Wonderful, sad, melancholy, & wistful, with a beautiful picture and presentation. ~Soft smiles & hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (10-25-2003 09:22 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Your rays a delight this morning but then you always are. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Oh glorious October, blesses the poet's pen |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
This is great smile i like it wery much. Smiles Jes |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What lovely innocense in the changing and the seeking of peaceful passage. Love the recent picture. Such beauty shines in your life Kar... TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh Karliea, this is so sad, from you...not expected, but well-liked |
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IrishDreamer Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 55Kansas |
both the picture and the poem simply breath taking. ~Angie~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Karilea, this is so very heartfelt and melancholy, sweet friend, it's hard to imagine this fleeting moment and surely I only hope so much was left behind to read, with tears of hope speckling the pages! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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