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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-10-25 09:15 AM



Leaves




The leaf

              Fluttered

                          Shuddered

                                         Withered

                                                             Wept.


The poet penned passion upon page’s leaf, then

              Fluttered,

                          Shuddered
        
                                         Withered

                                                             Wept.


October gave up her leaves.

The poet closed her book, and vanished.

~*~

In memory.


© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-25 09:21 AM


WOW!!  Now here Karilea..is another example of the ones you pen
which make my breath catch in my throat.
Wonderful, sad, melancholy, & wistful,
with a beautiful picture and presentation.
~Soft smiles & hugs~


~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (10-25-2003 09:22 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-10-25 09:26 AM


Sunshine
Your rays a delight this morning but then you always are.

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-10-25 09:27 AM


Oh glorious October, blesses the poet's pen
Jes
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4 posted 2003-10-25 11:55 AM


This is great smile i like it wery much.

Smiles

Jes


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5 posted 2003-10-25 12:10 PM


What lovely innocense in the changing and the seeking of peaceful passage.
Love the recent picture.  Such beauty shines in your life Kar...
TD

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6 posted 2003-10-25 01:48 PM


gosh Karliea, this is so sad, from you...not expected, but well-liked
IrishDreamer
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7 posted 2003-10-25 01:58 PM


both the picture and the poem simply breath taking.  

~Angie~

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8 posted 2003-10-25 07:10 PM






(big hugggssssssss) Oh Karilea, this is so very heartfelt and melancholy, sweet friend, it's hard to imagine this fleeting moment and surely I only hope so much was left behind to read, with tears of hope speckling the pages! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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