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A Puddles Muddle
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A Puddles Muddle |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A puddles muddle Watching out a fuddles muddle I jump across a muddy puddle But on the jump I caught some mud It looked to me an old rose bud. A dark of reminiscing grime Another place another time And I was sad this rile of lace That struck my soul, this time and place. It pierced me with a phantoms lance And struck me with a hurts nuance And I was caught illusions breath That did not die a proper death Within an ancient written page It lit a fancy of old age That stays within my file and find A piece of gum that sticks my mind A piece of stud that ever clings A bit of mud but with a sting |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now Sy, whether or not you intentionally wanted to lead me down the garden's path, I do not know, but Sir, please realize, you opened up a Pandora's box of memories. I shall ponder on them. Perhaps there's a gem in there, still. Good morning, Sy.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! How I enjoyed this muddle of a puddle! I brought you tea and a little cuddle. ~Morning hugs and tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I'm sure you will find good ones.  Nancy, I'd be delighted to have tea with you. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
here's mud in your eye a toast to another gem of yours...... good morning, good morning...........  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess More mud, I already have enough. LOL |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
I do like this one Sy. Did you know, that the Chocolate Monster was a flyin' around on her trusty broom and fell into your muddy puddle and now she is in a muddle in the muddy puddle? The Chocolate Monster is tongue tied.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie, Be careful I love Chocolate. LOL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Dear Fuddle-Duddle-Muddy-Puddle-Jumper!  ~ Heed warning on ancient page of old age: "Be wary of muddle puddles!" Angel hugs & kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, I'd take your advice but some times it just comes on. LOL |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
It pierced me with a phantoms lance And struck me with a hurts nuance And I was caught illusions breath That did not die a proper death Hi Seymour Sometimes those muddy puddles just won't dry up, will they? A good thought-provoker poem, my friend.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel My dove you are a love. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It pierced me with a phantoms lance And struck me with a hurts nuance And I was caught illusions breath That did not die a proper death =================================== Could that verse be any cooler??!!!??!!! and these lines.... And I was sad this rile of lace A piece of gum that sticks my mind too cool for school!! Forget the muddle and the puddle...tell Randy to get over here and cuddle  LOL*winkiewinkie*  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a sad tone to this one does anything really die a proper death? I wonder sometimes. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Passing, No it doesn't. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are the cool I am the fool And Randy a simpatico tool So fly high tinkerbell fly high Or Randy will catch your sigh. WWRS |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Plenty of puddles here today... and my mind always finds a muddle... how could I resist this poem? *S* Enjoyed it, my friend. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (10-25-2003 05:01 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you my love, it's always a pleasure to read you comments. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Mamma always said there will be fickle-faddled-fuddled-bewuzzled dubblin' days like this! (big hugggsssssss) Just go jump in the puddles to wash off, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thanks for the read and reply. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Do tears keep the puddle wet? Terri~  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Terri, Yes they do. |
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