About to give ........ - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #29

About to give ........

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

0 posted 2003-10-24 09:08 PM

Empty ya heart with all the good !
Its more than a forrest full of wood.
Spread it out in pieces with a smile !
You get a ten fold back in a while.

So then the story goes on and on !
We could live for long.
Please show ya hearts !
That is were life starts.

We must learn to give.

smiles from

Jes

[This message has been edited by Jes (10-24-2003 09:19 PM).]

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2003-10-25 02:16 PM

What a positive message! Amen to that!

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-10-25 02:19 PM

Oh Jes...it is so hard to learn the English language, isn't it?

You are doing fine...keep learning...keep smiling.

There is a good lesson in this poem of yours. I liked it.

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

3 posted 2003-10-28 03:19 AM

Thanks smile

Yes it is sometimes abit hard to translate and to type the words right.

But smile i hope you got the meaning anyway.

Smile

Jes

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.