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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

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0 posted 2003-10-24 12:20 PM

The desire of
a touch -
is to simply lose
itself

in the fabric of your skin.

I brush your cheek,

And
fall

Lost within a touch.

[This message has been edited by Ericc (10-24-2003 12:21 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-10-24 12:29 PM

Damn...

just damn.

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-10-24 12:40 PM

~ and I'm sure she is lost in your touch as well! How romantic you are!

EA

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2003-10-24 01:10 PM

eric...ya know? i just LOVE your poetry...helen

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2003-10-24 04:57 PM

oh yes.......you have such a way of making the reader not only see the words, but feel their touch! How do you do that?....loved this one! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-10-24 05:09 PM

Ericc,
That sounds about right. Enjoyed

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-10-24 05:10 PM

I would enjoy knowing
the source of this
inspire.

It is very nice.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2003-10-24 06:15 PM

Hi Karilea!

The closest I can possibly say is...it's the experince of "God...touching God." Sometimes a touch is a homecoming. The concept of "you, I, us, them" is absent.

We forget ourselves in this touch...and in the process...we find ourselves...as something...more.

As of a single thread wakes in the silken dream of a blanket...and remembers..."This is who I am."

Love,
Eric

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-10-24 06:23 PM

it is not something
that can be felt
in the physical
as an act or rite
of passage but a sense
of home and belonging
with a look of deep sea
from one sight to another
and mouth to breath to
touch of tranquil
belonging

Eric, I know exactly what you mean
and am stealing this as my own
for me and my love
*smile*
Absolutley beautiful
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (10-24-2003 06:24 PM).]

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

9 posted 2003-10-24 06:30 PM

You've taken my breath away.

Crystal

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-10-25 07:47 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, may every fabric of your being be braided and encrusted with jewels and portraits of love, yay! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a treasure, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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displaced

11 posted 2003-10-26 01:51 AM

wow...that's powerful

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

12 posted 2003-10-26 07:04 AM

And this touch, Eric, is found in your words. I have read this several times as well as your reply to Karilea. I believe I have gotten hold of your wisdom. Thank you for this.

Patricia

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2003-10-27 09:11 AM

Yes... *S* Both poem and response are beautiful... and how the heart yearns to be dressed in that fabric always. *S*

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

14 posted 2003-10-28 01:41 AM

sometimes we take touch for granted..but through distance and being apart...I would give a million bucks for one touch right now .......

nice thoughts!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (10-28-2003 01:42 AM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

15 posted 2003-10-28 09:28 AM

"Sometimes a touch is a homecoming"

Yes.

I think I need to talk to Kit about getting a smiley hitting a nail on the head...

This, I understand.

Thank you, Eric.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

16 posted 2003-10-28 09:43 AM

I don't get much time online lately, but when I can get in here, I look for your poetry...and this is a perfect example of why I do! *SIGH* always so wonderfully romantic

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