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EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2003-10-24 11:16 AM

Duo

Unto thee my heart does cleave,
Depict me not as naïve.
My reason I can't deceive.
Loves’ wove in the pattern’s weave.

Ardor contained bound and chained,
This is how wants are constrained,
And emptiness thus maintained,
Is for fools who’d have love feigned.

Don’t be dense give up pretense,
We must accept the immense.
Being is no longer tense.
‘Tis simple truths that make sense.

I know delight dearest sprite,
The fires within me ignite.
Yea my heart has taken flight.
Lust was never so polite.

I love you say not adieu,
For my heart I can’t subdue.
I’m ever yours through and through.
Our calenture’s overdue.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-10-24 09:59 PM

This is very lovely....beautiful images come to mind when I read these words....
Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-10-24 10:12 PM

I love the way you write! *sigh*
Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2003-10-25 06:41 PM

Oh Shakespeare,
Such beauty comes from your pen in hand.
You take my breath away.

:-)

Hugs from one friend to another

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-10-25 06:55 PM

(smiles) Calendars can never come close to dating love, EVER!!! (big hugggsssssss) This is precious, sweet friend, you truly are a modern romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kevin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2003-10-25 08:55 PM

Still beautiful Shakespeare
:-)

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-10-25 09:16 PM

I know delight dearest sprite,
The fires within me ignite.
Yea my heart has taken flight.
Lust was never so polite.

Kevin, this is beautiful. I especially like the way
you had each verse end in a different rhyme.
Very good writing, Poet, Sir

Hugs

Ethel

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-10-25 10:16 PM

Very nice!

Terri~

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