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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-10-24 06:49 AM




festive candy corn
colored leaves
        swirl
ballerinas pirouette
littlewings on sky
        fly
kaleidoscope of
autumn tears
        spin
trees undress
fair maidens
        blush

........all float by
the eye of sky

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-10-24 10:47 AM


Michele - this deserves to go to the top once again...

BC

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Gaia
2 posted 2003-10-24 10:57 AM


a delightful festive read
thank you, Mish

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-10-24 11:03 AM


Michele, this is a beautiful poem for our Suzie......
and, yep....she's flying this week, for sure!!!  
Hugs to you and Suzie....and Ed, of course  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-10-24 11:09 AM


Ah a beautiful poem...
and I'll bet Sue is floating on cloud 9 this week.
Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-10-24 11:28 AM


This "eye of sky" is pie in my eye! Delightful!--as is the one for whom it was intended!

&
Linda

EvocativeVerse2
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6 posted 2003-10-24 11:47 AM


I loved this...nothing to be shy about...it is great.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

PassionandFun
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7 posted 2003-10-24 05:15 PM


How nice! Keep it up.
littlewing
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8 posted 2003-10-24 06:19 PM


Michele, my dear sister
floating indeed
you do know me well . . .

I am smiling huge over here
you are a beautiful soul
and I am grateful for you and this

Now I have Jimi in my head . . .

You got me floatin . . .
*smile*

Thank you - I am printing this and
bringing it to him so he can see too


Beautiful writing:

autumn tears
        spin
trees undress
fair maidens
        blush

Sue
xxoo  

angelblueyes
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9 posted 2003-10-24 07:00 PM


This was breathtaking just as Susie is.
Crystal

bklynboy
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florida
10 posted 2003-10-24 08:03 PM


Good Job!
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