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Awaken |
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Darren Junior Member
since 2003-09-30
Posts 30 |
Open your eyes and stretch out your heart, draw back the curtains and chase out the dark. Tear down your walls from all they encumber, the dawn has rose, now rise from your slumber. Take deep breaths and taste the dew, now shed your skin and shine like new. For the sun is yours, as it's always been. You her master and she your queen. Awaken your soul it sleeps to tight. Your spring has come and it's promise is bright. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice |
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Darren Junior Member
since 2003-09-30
Posts 30 |
thanks...  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
nice....h |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Wow. You've convinced me to brightly embark a new day! This has so much warmth and excitement. Sadelite |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is a joyous read, and sparkling with zest for the new day!! Excellent, my friend!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Darren Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I have put this in my library so I can come back to it in the mornings and be so inspired by its message. Wonderful write and welcome to our pages of blue. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I will look at all my awakenings in a new light. Crystal |
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Darren Junior Member
since 2003-09-30
Posts 30 |
You are all too kind, thankyou everyone. |
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