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secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
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0 posted 2003-10-24 06:12 AM



I am in hell? Who can help me?
I can t stand what is happening to me and what is going around me
I feel terrible and lonely so lonely after you
No one can feel me
No one can let me feel better
Where are you honey
Please come and hold me to your hand come and take me from this hell
Please I can’t see anything I became blind
My heart is tired from calling you
What I did wrong to love you
What I did wrong in my life
Why I see everything is destroying near me
I don’t have any one after you to talk to
Who will hear my stupid topics
Who will hug me and tell me goodnight
Who will feel me and fight with me
I promised you to not cry but I am sorry forgive me I couldn’t hide my huge tears
My mother just shouted to me I couldn’t imagine that she might know about what I did
Now I lost everything also I lost you, but I still feel you
I still feel that you’re with me, talking to me, calling me, and kissing me so warmly
I only can get ride from what inside me through these lines because I don’t have any one in my life except you
Now I am alone in the deserts without water
You are my every thing so how can they take you off from my heart
I am waiting now what will happened next and at the same time I am thinking to disappear so far a way
I can’t study, I can’t think, and I can’t do anything
I want to hear your voice you don’t know how your position in my heart
I start don’t care about anything  
I just still can breath you very well and touch your hand so softly
I am in hell no one can get me out except you
So try to find me please before I disappear  

You Are My End Secret Life...
Be Sure That I Can Be always With You...
Through The Distances...
Through Life Troubles...
Me And You Is One...

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Mary Ann
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since 2003-04-23
Posts 111

1 posted 2003-10-24 07:51 AM


Very honest and passionate..... I hope things improve for you......

hugs,

~MA~

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-10-24 07:55 AM


a totally expressed emotion...candid and very real....thank you for sharing.
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