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Open Poetry #29
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meteoraLP
Junior Member
since 2003-10-24
Posts 15
0 posted 2003-10-24 02:29 AM

rain

and the children play
on merry-go-rounds
and time itself stands still
as the glass around it breaks.

rain

and the disease it carries
shatters with life and
soon there is nothing but the drip-dropping of guns.

rain

and they walked on forever,
the silence betraying them
like a cold mountain full of flame.



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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883
1 posted 2003-10-24 08:44 AM

Deep, nice metaphors with this write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.
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