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Darren
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0 posted 2003-10-24 03:26 AM


I float in the buoyancy of an unconscious stream
In a boat made by a GOD my eyes have not seen
It transports me to places of beauty and wonder
Then I awaken and sadly it jaunts me asunder
How I wish I could record and playback these dreams
And perhaps understand and know of their means
But alas they're wiped out and replaced by days clutter
Only to return once again when I drift back deep under


[This message has been edited by Darren (10-25-2003 12:44 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Darren - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2003-10-24 03:30 AM


Oh, I really really enjoyed this one, as dreams are a fascinating subject to think about...a part of our hidden selves!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-10-24 03:36 AM




(big hugggssssssssss) Oh Darren, I know ever what you mean, sweet friend, dreams are too precious to be forgotten and I believe life is all about finding relationships in all random things and out of it all finding the identity of ourselves and the joy of living! Always cherish your dreams and hold them true to your heart, sweet friend, this is a precious debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Darren, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Darren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-24-2003 03:36 AM).]

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-10-24 04:35 AM


good write
Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-10-24 08:36 AM


Welcome to Passions, Darren!  It's so nice of you to stop by and share with us.  I hope to see more of your work in the coming days.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-10-24 09:02 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-10-24 09:05 AM


To dream or not to dream, that is the question! lol

It is the dreams of sweet, I like to keep.
The mares of night can run away and  hopefully never return!

Dream deep! Dream sweet! Dream often!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2003-10-24 09:16 AM


Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed your first post and look forward to more!

Please check your email for a special greeting!

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Darren
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8 posted 2003-10-24 02:59 PM


Thank you all, thank you Susan.
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2003-10-24 05:49 PM





A hearty WELCOME~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

angelblueyes
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10 posted 2003-10-24 07:09 PM


This is great.Dreams are so fascinating.Welcome to Passion's.I look forward to more writes.
Crystal

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