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meteoraLP Junior Member
since 2003-10-24
Posts 15 |
together they had sat outside hand in hand reached to the sky drawing the stars creating their lights (in the sky? in themselves?) one by one blackout and all is well stars fall down down down blackout and all is well and the girl by the corner weeps tonight blackout and all is well as the silent Dark shines high and bright blackout and all is well the flames surround him burning burning. blackout burn. and the artist's flame paints a picture in the sky. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Excellent post, and welcome to the blue pages... you may want to slow down your posts though 'cause three a day is generally the limit. I think most of us posted too many when we first came though, we all wanna. We need time to read them all and reply.. otherwise they may be looked over. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
There's no blackout in your writing in fact I can see starshine coming through your words write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what an ending! awesome write |
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