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Jes
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0 posted 2003-10-23 12:28 PM


I do not tend to hide !
But to write.

the truth inside !
can never be like hide.

Let us go !
to where we know !

Or never give up !
before we reach the top.

Is it life we like !
or is it just the hike.

We love !
thats why we are above.

I miss her !
and she knows but i cant refer.

Let life be !
as it is how we see.

smiles again Jes



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-10-23 01:26 PM


short and sweet
mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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2 posted 2003-10-23 09:33 PM


Enjoyed the meaning, nice write. This also  could mean a lot of different things, which is good.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
3 posted 2003-10-27 06:04 AM


Yes short and sweet... thanks

Sometimes its good when we dont know all the meanings a poem can tell, cause then it wouldnt be fun to read between the lines smile ..... Thanks

Smiles

Jes


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