The kiss that ever lasted !

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Open Poetry #29

The kiss that ever lasted !

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

0 posted 2003-10-23 11:51 AM

Someday !
we went away.
never felt the feel !
But we were sure we were real.

Let us come together !
Another day hopefully forever.
Our hearts are empty !
But we still are abit tempty.

We lost our hopes together !
But we will still love eachother forever.
I see through now !
What could i do how ?

Sometimes we feel like lost in a life thats only ours to be but i guess, somehow we will always be afraid to see.

Smiles from Jes

[This message has been edited by Jes (10-23-2003 11:53 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2003-10-23 01:34 PM

Jes, good write bt I don't understand the use of all those exclaimation points

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

2 posted 2003-10-23 01:38 PM

Thanks passing

Its weird but i guess thats somehow my way to tell theer is a question in sentence one and teh answer maybe is folloowed after that.

Its a way fro mee to tell a sentence at a time so you make like a stop after each sentence, maybe to think it over or its just, abit danish writing brought with over to english smile.

but hope you undertsand it anyway, matter of fact i feel you do.

smiles

Jes

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