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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-10-23 09:51 AM

Upon the chrysalis of sky
they dip their branches
like foutain pens
into the ink of the heavens,
siphoning sunsets
reclaiming hues that have sunk
like wrinkles on the face of sky,
they are reapers of fate,
a step ahead of the current season
dreaming of the one
that will take the darker days by surprise,
rooted deeply in history
and reaching for the promise of tomorrow,
with bare branches now,
extending beyond the seeing world,
revelling in both pinklace
and comfortable in starkness of total exposure,
eternal survivors
testimonials
to both esctasy and sorrow
breezing through
as just passages of time

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-23-2003 06:10 PM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-23 09:53 AM

...they dip their branches
like fountain pens
into the ink of the heavens,
siphoning sunsets

~*~

Little one, this is more than lovely.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-23-2003 09:54 AM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-10-23 09:57 AM

Oh my!! I love this!
Beautiful indeed...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-10-23 09:58 AM

thanks
just for you.....

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-10-23 10:03 AM

with bare branches now,
extending beyond the seeing world,
revelling in both pinklace
and comfortable in starkness of total exposure,
eternal survivors
testimonials
to both esctasy and sorrow

~*~

Had to come back for a re-read...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2003-10-23 10:54 AM

nice read

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-10-23 11:12 AM

Michele:

this is just brilliant . .
perfect stanza

Upon the crysalis of sky
they dip their branches
like foutain pens
into the ink of the heavens,

and this?
leaves do return, m'lady
every season . . .
*smile*
xxoo

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-10-23 11:38 AM

inkedgoddess,
That's true, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-10-23 01:32 PM

just beautiful

I like this

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

9 posted 2003-10-23 03:14 PM

wow...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-10-23 03:38 PM

a step ahead of the current season
dreaming of the one
that will take the darker days by surprise,
rooted deeply in history
and reaching for the promise of tomorrow

Michelle, this is so beautiful. I love the way you write
about natue and the seasons....just beautiful.

Hugs

Ethel

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

11 posted 2003-10-23 04:04 PM

beauty

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

12 posted 2003-10-23 06:44 PM

Well done!

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