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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-10-23 08:39 AM

Heavenly body
Held in light by palm of moon
Curled in gentle keep

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-10-23 08:54 AM

Wonderful Karilea....much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2003-10-23 09:12 AM

*smiling at you*

I saw this very moon this morn about 5 am ...
was taken back how the sliver of cresent lit up the rest of it...and now...here you are shining too.

"I've still got sand in my shoes
and I can't shake the thought of you ...
I wanna see you again."

Dido

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-10-23 09:27 AM

Karilea~
You know the moon's my thing .... LOVELY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Lady Of Light
Junior Member

since 2003-10-23

Posts 31

4 posted 2003-10-23 10:02 AM

A beautiful poem, I enjoy brevity in poetry.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2003-10-23 10:04 AM

beautiful and inspiring....

hugsss

lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2003-10-23 10:32 AM

Smiling at you, this is lovely Sunnylady!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-10-23 10:53 AM

enjoyed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-10-23 01:43 PM

nice

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

9 posted 2003-10-23 05:26 PM

Hi dear Sunshine,

what a lovely poem and such a marvelous picture!

Thanks for thinking of me. Hope all is well with you. How is the writing coming along?

Hugs,

Corinne

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2003-10-23 05:38 PM

A beautiful image Karilea

I love your new pic too, is that Emily? She is gorgeous.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2003-10-23 06:36 PM

Very nice...James

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

12 posted 2003-10-23 06:55 PM

I'll have to remember and take a look tonight, if this moon is still hanging around.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

13 posted 2003-10-23 06:57 PM

Very nice, my friend.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2003-10-23 06:58 PM

enjoyed this

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

15 posted 2003-10-24 12:42 PM

I seen the moon last night when I walked out of work at midnight. Loved the verse.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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