Open Poetry #29 |
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Watching Her Go |
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Ringo![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes ![]() |
He's watching her walk away He knew it wouldn't last Yet he held out the hope That she would make life Something special again To be prized Cherished He stood there hoping Yet in a single phrase Uttered in her moment of joy He watched her leave And turned Slowly Wandered off alone To face the rest of his years Please don't read anything into this... It actually is just what came out and means nothing in my life. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
hard not to read into that...very specific and very real, thanks for the experience i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes poems write themselves I know I've watched it happen. Thank you, Ringo. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thinking sad thoughts today ey? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah..this is a sad one indeed... glad it was just a random thought and not fact. ~Soft smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Bradly, I am happy that this isn't relating to your life, as I am currently living with this curse, and since New Years Day this year has been difficult for me, with much miscommunication and severity! (sigh) I know this feeling, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bradly, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ringo~ Great penning ... when the thoughts flow, grab 'em and slap 'em to the page~ There is a tender beauty in this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ringo![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Mytuesdaywishes- Thank You. Sunshine- It is a strange phenomenon, isn't it??? Thanks for reading it. Shadows- Actually, not having sad thoughts today at all. Or even yesterday. I have had my share, and have decided it's time to give someone else a turn. lol Nancy- Thank you much. Noah- I do understand the challenges you are facing. You have my sincerest wishes for a speedy recovery to your ailing heart. Marge- Thanks again. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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