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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2003-10-21 11:57 PM


words of hypocrisy, no disparity, no meaning,
words just slide away into an abyss of blackness never to be seen, does it really matter for it's just a fairy tale right? no feelings, no love, no turmoil, as one with another just alone to tell the tale of woe of misapprehension of three in a row, snakes swivel across my toes, seeping with evil alure of poison ,wanting to seep into my veins, still words of the soul are invisible, so poison seeps in and takes ahold of one misguided motion,
stumbling under the darkest skies, stars twinkle but not above the haze of the illusion that hovers over my destiny. The darkness hangs on to the concave moon.

[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (10-21-2003 11:59 PM).]

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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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1 posted 2003-10-23 09:53 PM


Deep and interesting. Enjoyed it.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Rosebud1229
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North Carolina
2 posted 2003-10-24 12:26 PM


thx mysticpoe, You can tell I write in all styles just depends on my mood. thx for reply hope your day goes great.
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