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Open Poetry #29

One distant summer gone

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2003-10-21 01:14 PM

Alas, the hiena judges a submissive flaw
No mercy carries voodoo piercing cold cycles

But fingerpaintings of my soul measured sensual
Little did you gaze
Your infamous diversity shows in the arua
Of an arena of bull fighting days
Hospice sketches correspondences
Exchanging audio cassettes
In some distant summer camp of phraseology
Often wishing I was able to reinterate

But you were luke-warm and self-centered
Demanding a dialogue I knew nothing about
Probing so deeply, oh how you were wrong
Carried out by the telephone, and the women you played

I’ll sacrifice everything…
In such an ingenius way
It no longer matters what you think, who you are?
Syntax finds the poem
One of feelings and mind experience
You were wrong! To mock me that way
To capitalize on deliberate ambitions of the forbidden fruits
You so smugly spoke of

Time in and time out…you played a game
Monopolized in what you stood to loose
Now the monarch is extinct
And I’m equally at home with crocodiles
There was no better teacher then you
Beguillling shaped eyes….with snout for fascinations
Cuddling volcanic islands…but you lost the glimpse
Of a rare bird…at sea

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2003-10-21 06:41 PM

Sometimes we just grow in different directions... and that can be a very sad realization to meet... Well penned, Lee...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-10-21 06:59 PM

Nice writing...James

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