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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-10-20 10:47 PM


more than leaves die here
underfoot i brace myself
for another fall

..and then one day you find..ten years have got behind you..no one told you when to run..you missed the starting gun..

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KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
1 posted 2003-10-20 10:55 PM


...and you run and you run to catch up with the sun but it's sinking...

I think I'm addicted to your words.

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2003-10-20 11:03 PM


damn.
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-10-20 11:03 PM


no no the leaves dont die ........they just make room for another season
like the quote of floyd, but whats "in the grass"

Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-10-20 11:05 PM


and racing around to come up behind you again..thanks Koko

hey red..hugs

Mish..'the lunatic is in the grass' another PF song..

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
5 posted 2003-10-20 11:09 PM


the sun is the same in a relative way but you're older...

sorry, lol..I'll go to bed now

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
6 posted 2003-10-20 11:18 PM


shorter of breath and one day closer to..

argh..yeah i think i'll join you off to bed...um wait..not literally join you..i meant..uh seperate beds..uh..crap

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-10-20 11:23 PM


smack me someone
of course
i just didnt put it all togehter
oh well
how dum
and dark side is like my all time favorite
maybe it is the bleach afterall

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
8 posted 2003-10-20 11:26 PM


My favourite too in fact before i fall asleep or suffer a total crash i'm off to listen to it again..night mishy and all
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
9 posted 2003-10-21 01:01 AM


Um..wow..
pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
10 posted 2003-10-21 03:01 AM


darkness, darkness, negativity so beautiful,
quite honestly u know how to capture instant moment of... reality

passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2003-10-21 03:29 AM


very cool

I know what you mean

Rainbowdust
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12 posted 2003-10-21 08:25 AM


Absolutely gorgeous Raph, I've always hated the name "fall" for a season as beautiful as autumn, but now I understand...

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

LeeJ
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13 posted 2003-10-21 08:29 AM




Awesome and sad...

littlewing
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14 posted 2003-10-21 09:06 AM


"Home . . . home again . . .
I like to be here, when I caaaan . . ."
*smile*

I agree with Ed up there . . .
"Fall"  sheesh

xxoo

Lady In White
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15 posted 2003-10-21 09:07 AM



Raph.
You continue
to excel.

Bravo!

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