Open Poetry #29 |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
more than leaves die here underfoot i brace myself for another fall ..and then one day you find..ten years have got behind you..no one told you when to run..you missed the starting gun.. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
...and you run and you run to catch up with the sun but it's sinking... I think I'm addicted to your words. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
damn. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no no the leaves dont die ........they just make room for another season like the quote of floyd, but whats "in the grass" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
and racing around to come up behind you again..thanks Koko hey red..hugs Mish..'the lunatic is in the grass' another PF song.. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
the sun is the same in a relative way but you're older... sorry, lol..I'll go to bed now |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
shorter of breath and one day closer to.. argh..yeah i think i'll join you off to bed...um wait..not literally join you..i meant..uh seperate beds..uh..crap |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
smack me someone of course i just didnt put it all togehter oh well how dum and dark side is like my all time favorite maybe it is the bleach afterall |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
My favourite too in fact before i fall asleep or suffer a total crash i'm off to listen to it again..night mishy and all |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Um..wow.. |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
darkness, darkness, negativity so beautiful, quite honestly u know how to capture instant moment of... reality |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool I know what you mean |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Absolutely gorgeous Raph, I've always hated the name "fall" for a season as beautiful as autumn, but now I understand... The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Awesome and sad... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
"Home . . . home again . . . I like to be here, when I caaaan . . ." *smile* I agree with Ed up there . . . "Fall" sheesh xxoo |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Raph. You continue to excel. Bravo! |
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