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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-10-20 01:07 PM



Excelling

Though a hurdle was put in front of you
On your journey to advance
That doesn't mean you failed
As I see it you "Excelled"
Their choice was made
Before you took your stride
Still you went in there
And took your test with pride
You didn't know they had made the list
And you showed them what you've got
Soon the time will come
And you will get another shot


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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-10-20 01:47 PM


this is about the nicest poem i have ever read...thank you jerr...helen
alisa
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since 2003-08-20
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2 posted 2003-10-21 02:25 AM


so very very true....

great one!!

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