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Self Slavery
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Self Slavery |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Mechanical cyber erotic visionaries speaking in unknown tongues come to me in paranoia induced dream Playing tricks on my feeble mind hot metal burns the flesh making me see a god inside my mental prison Craving sensuality from inanimate icons of reality past which call to me lustfully turning my tainted soul inside out I wish I could sleep again without the demons crawling out from under my skin as I pop my pills and pray to a saviour I forgot in Sunday School rhetoric Laying my head to mortal sleep on satin sheets next to some sexual fix think of the meaning of life before falling to sleep in mental vomit. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
WOW!!WOW!!!WOW!!!! I could feel every word and feel every beat of my heart as I read this.You have an amazing talent.Don't ever let go of it.  Crystal |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Where have you been???? You could let a person know you are alright once in the while... Another thought provoking great piece!! and...ahem..its good to see you! Susan "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So that's what you've been doing during your nights--and days?!? My goodness, after nights like those, I'd want to sleep all of my days away! Brad, your writing packs power punches! Zowie!--smack dab in the middle of the solar plexus! Tonight try a nice cup of warmed milk with some vanilla in it before you go to sleep!  ~ Wishing you peaceful nights and dreams of sweet!  Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hey Brad, good to see you in there, where in the world have you been....missed reading you. You were one of the first poets here I'd read.... Thank goodness you've posted again..and what a whopper of a Poem....as always genius and perfectly written. Good to see you!!!  |
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Wayfarer Junior Member
since 2003-10-08
Posts 14 |
A nasty vision of a tortured soul of a modern world. Grim and dark, I liked it |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Thank you all for reading. Susan I'm sorry I'll do better next time  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
welcome back, brad... a nice write this one... regards sudhir |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah, yes, lust can be quite enslaving, a torturous master....if not having pulled closed our own door, many of us have at least visited that prison very powerful write |
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