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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-10-09 08:18 PM



Reigning Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

~*~
Moon glow
of such great delight
waltz me across the sky
this night Ever in your glow
contain me Lend your light to
gently reign me In the aura
of your beams Light within
my waiting dreams Moon
of wonder and delight
Shine on me
~*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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1 posted 2003-10-09 08:22 PM


Beautiful Marge...I'm looking at lovely luna now.
~Smiles & Hugs for this winner, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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2 posted 2003-10-09 08:23 PM


How beautiful...simple but gorgeous!

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3 posted 2003-10-09 08:27 PM


Another work worth reading thanks
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4 posted 2003-10-09 09:32 PM


beautiful.....
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5 posted 2003-10-09 11:01 PM


The moon has been beautiful, just like your words.
Betty

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6 posted 2003-10-09 11:03 PM


ohhhh Marge I love how you do these.....each full of splendor and your grace.....beautiful....


Lauren~

There's a song inside  my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

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7 posted 2003-10-10 01:33 AM


Dear Marge:

I just came inside from looking at that glorious moon, playing peek-a-boo with big, dark clouds. Reading your poem brought all that splendor right back to mind!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2003-10-10 01:38 AM


I was watching the moon tonight on the ride home.Your words are lovely and captures the moon in all it's beauty.
Crystal

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9 posted 2003-10-10 11:29 AM


Moon
of wonder and delight
Shine on me...


Ahhh, another wonderful and luscious shape poem of LaLuna! Always so impressive dear Moon Lady.

Huggles and Smiles, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

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10 posted 2003-10-10 11:30 AM


I love the softness in your written verse Marge...you do this so well.  HUGS
Margherita
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11 posted 2003-10-10 12:03 PM


Dear Marge you are a moon-creature and the moon shines beautifully through your words.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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12 posted 2003-10-10 12:07 PM


So very beautiful. *S*
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13 posted 2003-10-10 01:24 PM




Ahhhh,you all give me such delight
To know the moon in share
gathers friends from everywhere
Across the world in glowing rays
finds me swooning in your praise
Gift of friendships warmth
allows the awe of you
to reach the heart of me
Poetic friends, take a bow~

Thank you ALL~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

Martie
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14 posted 2003-10-10 01:59 PM


Marge/sis...Love the moon, and you!
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15 posted 2003-10-11 05:42 PM


So very beautiful Marge, as always.

Take care......Sue

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I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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16 posted 2003-10-11 06:29 PM


Nice -- you really nailed this one!



~~J

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17 posted 2003-10-11 06:30 PM


beautiful
Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2003-10-11 06:41 PM


Once again, I thank EACH of you for liking what I LOVE to do~

Appreciating each kind reply~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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19 posted 2003-10-11 07:38 PM


very good write and created very well,,,
enjoyed,,,

                                                                               

Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2003-10-21 03:04 PM


QJQ~
Thankee guy~

Hey, where ya' been ???
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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