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A Salty Argosy
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A Salty Argosy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Salty Argosy Fallacy flows through my wings Making coup the rue of things Hosts my spirits rage with pain The ache of age and old refrain Burning me a fires stake and Bellows echo in its wake Melting me to simmers moans Charring black my very bones. And wind stirs up the residue And spills the dust in breezes spews Graying out the sun and light Bringing shadows shun of night Spewing out a dark oil stain Cunning down my windowpane Rising up the water fall In mists of agonies appall In tentacles of jealousy I wile a salty argosy |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Ok, no grey skies today, Mr....hunker down and put on a happy heart...cause your the best dog goned apple in the entire tree...or the sugar in my coffee...and the gentle waves within my sea...smiles and hugs  Good good morning sir....and wishing you a top of the morning to ya...with yet a better day to come.... Very beautifully written my friend, thanks so much. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
No tentacles of jealousy necessary in your life, dear Sy - Let the rest envy you, m'friend...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Now that is a broad smile of a comment today And the top of it to you.   Nan, My love you are a love. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! A keeper of a post this ayem. Much enjoyed the read indeed. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now even this is too much salt for me... pass the peanuts. Good morning, Sy! I think Lee said it all... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you my sweet. Sunshine, I think you are right she did a job this morning. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Burning me a fires stake and Bellows echo in its wake Melting me to simmers moans Charring black my very bones. And wind stirs up the residue And spills the dust in breezes spews ================================== Me thinks if you write any COOLER, that youre gonna hurt something!! LOL  just look at these clever turn of phrase and word play filled couplets...and as always your cadence banter and internal rhymes. You turn mornings into poetry and moths into Tinkerbells. *ww* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And you bring to life my Randy dragon. WWRS |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LOL Seymour...I agree with Janet Marie this morning. ahahahaha!!  Me thinks if you write any COOLER, that youre gonna hurt something!! LOL You and your Randy are something else, Sir. Hugs  Ethel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thanks for the late morning ride! Susan "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel You both are sweethearts. Susan, Any time, thank you for the read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you for the reply. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I'm not jealous...nope, nope, nope, nope, NOPE! Nicely done Mr. Top Shelf, best apple on the tree Sy.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, LOL That's the kind of replies I like. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pulling out all your poetic bags of tricks I see! There's no messing with a master! You spin such sonnetic magic, Sir Tumbleweed!  Angel hugs & kisses, EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Seymour, you're way too good and cool to be jealous, sweet friend, now now now, look up to the sun and chase your own butterflies again, yay! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I still let my cyber parrot read me your poems~ I just sit back and smile~ Love the flowing cadence of ALL you pen~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Randy just nudged me in the ribs and said he like you. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, You know everbody has feet of clay. LOL Marge, You are a sweetheart. |
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