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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-10-20 02:53 AM

So mine is the heart that's unbeatable.
The breath that cannot be breathed,
eyes that may never blink.

I refuse to look straight down and miss the sky.

There is not one god hiding in my misty waters,
nor demons infested within.
Struggle the power of this barren solitude,
I will not capture my own sin.

So crucify me with your guilt, you slave,
you shackled and tortured waste.
Think not of my purity in hell,
this promise I've misplaced..

So I too, am a liar..
I've beckoned the breath of the devil,
the warm wind, like an imagined summer.

Mine is the soul that is unforgiven,
I hold the fire to my breast..
For the ocean breathes nothing but lies to me,
promising I'll be blessed.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-10-20 05:13 AM

to be blessed, I've learned, is something hidden.
Its the moment in time when you aren't frowning...
and the call you don't expect.
the smile you give... to somebody else.

But this... its just sad

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2003-10-20 09:44 AM

I refuse to look straight down and miss the sky.

~*~

Amen.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-10-20 10:01 AM

great write meg

..and then one day you find ten years have got behind you no one told you when to run you missed the starting gun..

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2003-10-20 11:00 AM

There is a dark sadness that runs through this....you have such a talent.....
Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-10-20 11:07 AM

"So crucify me with your guilt, you slave,
you shackled and tortured waste.
Think not of my purity in hell,
this promise I've misplaced"

So many great lines...but those above are my favorite...

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

6 posted 2003-10-20 11:09 AM

Your talent seems it can only be a blessing..

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

7 posted 2003-10-20 11:39 AM

"Mine is the soul that is unforgiven,
I hold the fire to my breast.."

and maybe you should keep it,
she writes so beautiful...

" I've been down so god damn long
that it looks like up to me"
Jim Morrison

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

8 posted 2003-10-20 11:43 AM

Your talent abounds from the page with great force that it takes my breath away.

Crystal

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2003-10-20 12:38 PM

"So mine is the heart that's unbeatable."

~ and so is your poetry!

EA

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

10 posted 2003-10-20 04:29 PM

Meg-you always write so elequently(sp??) i always enjoy reading your work, you are missed in dark

but i am glad to see you are still writing so wonderfully!

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

11 posted 2003-10-21 03:16 PM

The fire... And the pain below.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-10-21 03:55 PM

(big hugggssssssss) I hate to see any liar being forgiven in full, and it just isn't right for these kind of consequences to happen! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you as you surely are the more blessed one, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

13 posted 2003-10-21 05:52 PM

Please try and get in here more often meg!

You truly do stun me with your beautifully woven words, and the darkness behind them, with an innocence still there behind it all.

I'll shut up.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

14 posted 2003-10-21 06:00 PM

wow, this is deep...me likes =) rok on!

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

15 posted 2003-10-22 05:51 PM

For the ocean breathes nothing but lies to me

I guess that depends on which way the wind blows.

Always a pleasure to read you Kaoru.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

16 posted 2003-10-23 05:30 AM

speechless

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