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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2003-10-19 09:53 PM

Sadness
comes upon burdened wings
when words are seldom seen
and never heard.  When the
door stands mute to the knock
upon the grain.

The unseen smile, one which catches
my mind’s eye...not there to grace
the pastures of my heart.

Laughter, once echoing the walls,
as silent as the steeple of a church
with no bell to ring or bats
to scurry
into
    the night’s air.

When a friend is missed....
sadness falls like frozen rain
upon the river’s edge...as
a current of concern washes
the shore away.

Yes...yes it does...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-10-19 09:57 PM

Yes it is true.

Very nicely done.

(Just noticed your last name, I went to bootcamp with a Pam Tackett, not a common name)

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2003-10-19 09:57 PM

Another wonderful write here Barry with fantastic images.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-10-19 09:58 PM

"When a friend is missed....
sadness falls like frozen rain
upon the river’s edge...as
a current of concern washes
the shore away."

How very true m'friend...how sad but true.
Excellent write Barry...
~Soft smiles & tender hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

MorninGlory
Member

since 2003-08-30

Posts 175
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-10-19 09:59 PM

Sounds like sad days, not hearing from a friend you care about. We worry about those we love, wonder if they are ok, just a note or a quick call makes a difference. Seems like such a personal write, I wish you all the luck with your friend. Very nicely written.

~ becky

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-10-19 10:05 PM

Some wonderful works in these last days Barry. Our minds move in like waters apparently.
Not to worry...friends never stray far from the heart. Great Write. TD

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

6 posted 2003-10-19 10:20 PM

i know the feeling :Þ love, in any form, hurts and heals....friends are why we write

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-10-19 10:38 PM

Barry, dear man...this is so true!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-10-20 05:14 AM

I know about sadness

hugs to you

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

9 posted 2003-10-20 09:35 AM

You never miss
an opportunity
to tell us
what's in your heart.

Thank you, my friend.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-10-20 10:14 AM

liked this

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2003-10-20 10:56 AM

When a friend is missed....
sadness falls like frozen rain
upon the river’s edge...as
a current of concern washes
the shore away. ''''
AWWWWW such sadness....yet done so gracefully....hugssss I know the ache of this..
Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

12 posted 2003-10-20 12:34 PM

Sad, but full of such truth.

Crystal

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

13 posted 2003-10-20 12:42 PM

Hurt to read this. So close to home. If it helps ..here's a hand to just squeeze when you need to. It's there. Maybe I'm a stranger, but I'm not when I feel so much the same. Godspeed for your pain. I hope it swiftly finds it's way out of your existence. I know it takes alot from you.
Love,
Terri~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

14 posted 2003-10-20 12:44 PM

...saved it before I forgot to! Now, where was I?--oh, yes ~

!!!

The wealth of your life experiences spills over into your poetry and it never ceases to touch me.

EA

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

15 posted 2003-10-20 01:33 PM

Magnus~
Felt the all of this penning~
Sometimes it seems to me that you are writing my thoughts also ... this is one of those times~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

16 posted 2003-10-20 04:34 PM

Sadness
comes upon burdened wings
when words are seldom seen
and never heard. When the
door stands mute to the knock
upon the grain.

Yes...and so often, the friend (or other) may be present in the physical and yet the words remain unsaid, unseen.

A great write, Barry! I think I will go back once more for another read.

Patricia

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2003-10-20 04:45 PM

So very true... so beautifully written. *S*

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