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Darling |
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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
(This is an old one that I wrote about 5 months ago to my at the time boyfriend (who is now my fiancee ^^) Yes I know its extremely long, Sorry ^^ Please be nice lol and please reply) To me you mean the world Your touch and soft embrace Makes me whole To me YOu are everything The way you hold me And gently kiss me Makes me alive When you tell me You love me I feel as though My heart could reach the sky YOu're so wonderful Like a gem Of a rare find When your hurt, upset Or in pain I will come by your side To try and help no matter what I am here for you Always and forever My darling, my life, My light, and my soul I love you more Than I can express Or you could ever know The days unfilled By your touch or voice Seem empty to me The days I spend with you Stand out and are complete My Darling, I love you This I want you to know Without you Life would be nothing I'm so glad To be with you I'm so glad I belong to you No matter what happens In days yet to come Please always remember Just call on me and tell me Your probelms of any kind And I'll be your comforter, Your lover, and be by your side Though at times I may Upset you Believe me I don't try My only purpose is to make You happy in life Always and forever I will love you Always and forever I will be yours Always and forever I will stay by your side I love you My Darling so close to me The one held most dear to me I love you, always My Darling, Jeremy |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
beautifully expressed...congratulations to you and yours i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is very warm and loving. It is a bit long, and might be more effective if it were less repetitive. But then again, there's something to be said for repetition. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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