Open Poetry #29 |
Who Started This Mess? |
n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
A wolf once told me that if we didn’t leave him alone he’d just leave… Seems he thinks he doesn’t Need our help Once I heard two stars discussing always being late… They seem to think they get way too much credit And I heard a man once saying how he was gonna save the planet… Eternity is still laughing © Copyright 2003 Joseph D. Carreno II Peace, Joe |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I much enjoyed your insight here.Well penned. Crystal |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like this very much. Thank you. |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
wow.....i love this...its so well thought out, and you have to read it a couple times, but man, you've got it i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Perhaps the new Gov of California will step in the change everything...LOL Nice write, Joe! |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
I read this a couple of times, then it made sense to me. Good job! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s M |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
thank you all for the kind comments. ding - I think Arnold couldn't change his sox without a leftist holding his foot ;-} Peace, Joe |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I loved the last line. The whole thing is great. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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