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n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

0 posted 2003-10-19 03:52 PM

A wolf once told me
that if we didn’t leave him alone
he’d just leave…
Seems he thinks he doesn’t
Need our help

Once I heard two stars discussing
always being late…
They seem to think they get way
too much credit

And I heard a man once
saying how he was
gonna save the planet…
Eternity is still laughing

© Copyright 2003 Joseph D. Carreno II

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-10-19 03:56 PM

I much enjoyed your insight here.Well penned.

Crystal

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-19 03:56 PM

I like this very much.
Thank you.

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

3 posted 2003-10-22 01:26 AM

wow.....i love this...its so well thought out, and you have to read it a couple times, but man, you've got it

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

4 posted 2003-10-22 06:12 AM

Perhaps the new Gov of California will step in the change everything...LOL
Nice write, Joe!

PouringJewels
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since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

5 posted 2003-10-22 06:30 AM

I read this a couple of times, then it made sense to me. Good job!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2003-10-22 09:19 AM

*s

M

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

7 posted 2003-10-22 11:22 AM

thank you all for the kind comments. ding - I think Arnold couldn't change his sox without a leftist holding his foot ;-}

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-10-22 12:51 PM

awesome!

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

9 posted 2003-10-22 05:11 PM

I loved the last line. The whole thing is great.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-10-22 05:13 PM

enjoyed

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